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person Chocho
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. I love the ending. it was a good story.
person mamarita
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you did the epilogue. And knowing that Yuki really did love Shuichi all along, I wasn't completely surprised at the engagement ring. What I am surprised at is that Ryu didn't do something similar- hehe! Great story- and I look forward to your next one. DLS
person YoursXxXTruly
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EPILOGUE, EPILOGUE, EPILOGUE!!!!

Fantastic story!!! <33333 Aw, you scared me, meanie! As I was reading, I thought Tatsu and Shu would end up together, but I LOVE Ryu, so I was almost crying! !!!!!!!!!!
Hey, if you do an
person YoursXxXTruly
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EPILOGUE, EPILOGUE, EPILOGUE!!!!

Fantastic story!!! <33333 Aw, you scared me, meanie! As I was reading, I thought Tatsu and Shu would end up together, but I LOVE Ryu, so I was almost crying! !!!!!!!!!!
Hey, if you do an
person YoursXxXTruly
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EPILOGUE, EPILOGUE, EPILOGUE!!!!

Fantastic story!!! <33333 Aw, you scared me, meanie! As I was reading, I thought Tatsu and Shu would end up together, but I LOVE Ryu, so I was almost crying! !!!!!!!!!!
Hey, if you do an
person YoursXxXTruly
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EPILOGUE, EPILOGUE, EPILOGUE!!!!

Fantastic story!!! <33333 Aw, you scared me, meanie! As I was reading, I thought Tatsu and Shu would end up together, but I LOVE Ryu, so I was almost crying! !!!!!!!!!!
Hey, if you do an
person YoursXxXTruly
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I am SO sorry for all the times that posted! My compy's being lame ;[

Umm anyway, if you do an epilogue, could you email me and let me know? I don't get on here much, but it's really good!
winds_of_uruki@yahoo.com
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Epilogue..pweeese?
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwh I am kind of upset. The way you set it up it was like Shu and Tatsuha had feelings going for each other. I really thought they would end up together in the end, they looked cute together and it would have been nice. Oh well at least their happy, or what seems like happy.
person mamarita
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the story- not too long, and not too short. As for an epilogue, that might be nice, not too long, though.

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