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July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^_^nice i might have reviewed this already. Can't wait for the next scene!
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January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I usually dont like first person fics just because sometimes there is too much talking and no action, meanig showing not telling, but i gave this one a chance and i'm glade I did because it was not as i thought. I liked the fic very much. I liked that the sex part did not come around right away. Mugan might be a bit ooc at times because usually he isn't that sweet or sweet at all,but i understand the reasons for it in this one. Just dont make him to fluff like lol. :P Please continue!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
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January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh and also, i think its good u want reviews before u post because people just dont review, i seen a lot of hot fics and like two or three reviews. I mean if u read the fics, at least u can do is give the writer some props, god, are you that lazy?!!? Oh and to that person that just kept sending reviews without any response..okay..that makes no sense..O_O
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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. And there's sex in the next chapter!
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Muha! Yes!
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June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh. boy. a sex scene....Thaat would be nice but have enjoied what you have done so far too. But still put in the sex scene. lol
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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahahahah awesome story =D can't wait to see more. update soon!! ^____^
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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooooohhhh yay for the update!!!
Of course we want sex in the next chapter! The ending of the 3rd one SURELY implies that! w00000t!
Of course we want sex in the next chapter! The ending of the 3rd one SURELY implies that! w00000t!
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May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait! And it\'s okay, writer\'s block REALLY does suck.
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May 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holding your chapters hostage to get reviews? Really very mature! It seems you are more interested in the answers you can get than in telling your story.