rate_review Reviews

Mhmm,coming along well & with so many possiable pairings too. Can't wait for the twin's battle

oooh! i get it now. ^_^
i was trying to figure out where in the timeline this was (i realize u haven't seen the whole thing), & was getting really confused.
but now i see it's really an alternate-ending-type-thing. ^_^
u're actually pretty close to the actual events.

i hope u continue this eventually. even if u do see the actual end of the anime, it'd be interesting to see how u would've written it instead! *wanting the smut we didn't get in the series* ^_~

This is a pretty good story. I'm enjoying how you're plotting it out. It's my hope that sometime, if life permits, you'll be able to pick up this tale and add more to it. 8-)

You know, I had never really considered the possibility that Steve would do something like that to them.
But this story is great. I\'m really into it.

This is good... dont stop or ill have to hunt you down and force you to write more! haha....