rate_review Reviews

I can honestly say that this was the most amazing and well planned RogerxDorothy one-shot I've ever encountered. You did an amazing job writing this out, and I absolutely loved reading it. A superb job, really.

I gave it a 5/5. I look forward to anymore works you might have.

A very nice warm-and-fuzzy-feeling type of story. =3 Not a particular Big O fan, but I did like Dorothy. =3 Very interesting how you also depicted the actions and events elaborately. For a second, I had thought you were a male who wrote this, but after reading how everything was constructed, it was very much feminine-like. xD Not a bad thing, at all. I just wish I could see more perception like this in some of the more adult stories.

Sweet. I've never read a Big O fic before, and this has set the bar UNREASONABLY HIGH for anything I read now. Oh, Dorothy...

Anyway, why don't you write another story? I promise to review it...

O.O That was HOT!!! More please!!

that last line..... you mean you see it too...?

Oh man you even used the show ending that was a good story a bit short but good all the same

OMFCKINGGOD!!!!!!!!! That was beautiful, and sexual and yeah...Great JOB!!!

I loved your story it was sexy, yet sweet and romantic. You should consider posting this on the SBO adult site. A little smut is just what we need to perk things up. (no pun intended)

Overall I think you did a wonderful job of writing this story, although I do have a few things I don\'t like at all to be frank. Firstly, I can\'t really see Roger sitting while Dorothy goes out into town, even with Dastun, he would more likely than not, follow her. Next, why would Dastun escort Dorothy? True, he is Rogers friend and all but he never really seemed to go out of his way to help him, in fact throughout most of the anime series he is usually threatening him to stay out of the Military Police\'s way. Finally there is the part with Roger being drunk. True, in the anime you do see him go to a sleezy bar, but it was always for information, and he never really had the time to drink his drink if you think about it, he came to see Big Ear (The Jewish man for all of you who may or may not know, sorry if I come off rude to you guys.) and would have a small, 1-3 min conversation. Hardly enough time to drink I must say, and in all the bars that he visits in the anime, Amedeus, Big Ears (Sorry I\'ve forgotten the name of that bar.), and his own personal bar which seems well equipped, you never really see him drink anything. He does alude that he does drink on occasion, Dastun is put off from noticing a liquor he would of liked to of tried on that occasion.
Wow that was a lot of negatives, but really they could all happen the odds are slim though to be sure, but enough of that now for the positives. He did a wonderful job of capturing Dorothy\'s sullen attitude towards the world in general, as well as Norman\'s attitude as the servant, and the same goes for Roger\'s attitude with the exception of the forementioned problems. Not to mention you wrote a story on an anime series that is generally overlooked, and did a good job of that. Because of this I gave you a five star rating, or plus rating I guess it is now... Anyway I hope you are not too offended by my review because it really isn\'t supposed to be over critical, and I really hope you write some more.

That was so beautifully written and so acurately the end result of the series, I\'m sure, most Big O fans could have hoped for. You captured their personalities meticulously and drew into the deeper side of their human desires in a suitably elegant and dignified approach. Applauds.
I look forward to reading more from you.