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June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more would be awesome, i want to see some male on female action, excellent job so far
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June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Well written, and truly one for the well perverted XD. All I can do is patiently wait for the next update. =D
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June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is pretty bitchen. don\'t stop writing, and keep up the good work!
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May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey man, totaly uncool, I review and what do I get? A piece of cheese, that\'s right, and I\'m not giving any to you. This fanfiction has so much sex it\'s like los vegas in summer, sex around every corner, and sometimes even at the corner. lol. Anyways, nice piece here, I expect to see more. If you are in need of any suggestions, I have one right here. Pokeball anal beads.... Ookay, don\'t even ask where I got that, I think you insanity has curropted my fragile (yeah right) mind. Well, I better get going before I start to ramble on, so Sepher Phi, mother fucker.
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May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is easily one of the most origanal stories i have read. I\'m really enjoying it, please continue to add chapters. Write on!!!!!!! I cant wait until we meet Misty.
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May 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its goooooood more please
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May 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey man this story is so great but I want to Know when the next update is. Don\'t make me use the puppie dog eyes!
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May 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have never read such a pokemon story...its awesome
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May 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SUPER GOOD! Nicely written, hot and sexy stuff all over, lotts of sex. But you forgot one thing.. Protection. You can never do anything without protection. Bob! Bring me the protection! (A parcel drops from the sky) Thanks. (pulled out a 9mm pistol) See, protection, never leave home with out it. Alrighty then, I\'m off to go cap some random asses. Later.
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May 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
she gets laied a little to much. but hay its still a good story.