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this is good, please write more

I think it was great, the sex was just a little too quick. Add a little more description, and don't make the sex so fast, but don't make it extremely long. Overall, a very good story though. =]

LOL i went to review and i was lyk woah wait.. its called crash? okay! lol i just never knew the title i guess? idk... hmm! mm i love haruXkyo but i agree shigureXkyo and HatoriXkyo is good too!
so cheers to your first official haruXkyo!

I am no good with grammer, sentence struture or even punctuation. That is probably why I became a history major instead of an english major. I apologize if the story was painful to read. I definately need to work on my writing \"skills\". Oh and I shouldn\'t have been writing it in the first place...especially when swamped with homework. But I will definately go back and fix whatever I can.

why not just fix the grammer/ awkward sentances/ spelling before you posted?