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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First part was rather good. Gonna read second part next chance I get, k?
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a most excellent update. please don't end the story so soon!
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6 with Mewtwo.....Just wrong. How can you treat him like that? How can you injure him and his 'buddy' in that manner?
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-_-;
Mewtwo, I told you to use the thingy. It was a subspace portal intitation device. I could of had a few Creavons swing by and yank you to a parrallel dimension for a few days. Oh well.
These last few chapters were cool, doing double stories per chap eh?
Nice pairings, great format, hot sex.
So the fic is ending? Well, all good things must come to an end. I look foreward to your blaze of glory.
Untill the final bell tolls, this is CrazyIvan reminding you, there is no F in Combat, but there is in fight. Semper phi, carry on...
Mewtwo, I told you to use the thingy. It was a subspace portal intitation device. I could of had a few Creavons swing by and yank you to a parrallel dimension for a few days. Oh well.
These last few chapters were cool, doing double stories per chap eh?
Nice pairings, great format, hot sex.
So the fic is ending? Well, all good things must come to an end. I look foreward to your blaze of glory.
Untill the final bell tolls, this is CrazyIvan reminding you, there is no F in Combat, but there is in fight. Semper phi, carry on...
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooo, say it isn't so, I wanted to see a Giovanni/Domino (giovanni dominates) pairing
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you did that. "The mix of romance and raw good ole fuckin'" and the humor was priceless.
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well wll, more of this sht from the coqfag author. Your story ain't cool & the pairings suck. why bther to be hre anywys.
FUCKWAD!
FUCKWAD!
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So sorry for not reviewing again before now.
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Excellent fifth chaptor and the Halloween special was amazing. I loved reading Mewtwo getting raped by Domino.
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Excellent fifth chaptor and the Halloween special was amazing. I loved reading Mewtwo getting raped by Domino.
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is to awesome ;___; But you need to get to the Wes x Venus, NeoEliteShipping and Mewtwo x Lorelei chapters, if you're still gonna do em >D
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was certainly something else.
As for the next chapter...
Too bad for mewtwo eh? Though I think i got something that can help ya out.
(Mewtwo) "What are you talking about you insane whatever you are?"
Well, *Fished a small box out of his pocket and tossed it to Mewtwo* here, just open it before the bad stuff starts. *winked*
(Mewtwo) -_-; "I don't like the sound of that, but I might as well give it a shot."
Ahalrighty then, well, this is CrazyIvan, finaly done for the night so now I wil be signing off, signing off for now! Sepher Phi, carry on........
As for the next chapter...
Too bad for mewtwo eh? Though I think i got something that can help ya out.
(Mewtwo) "What are you talking about you insane whatever you are?"
Well, *Fished a small box out of his pocket and tossed it to Mewtwo* here, just open it before the bad stuff starts. *winked*
(Mewtwo) -_-; "I don't like the sound of that, but I might as well give it a shot."
Ahalrighty then, well, this is CrazyIvan, finaly done for the night so now I wil be signing off, signing off for now! Sepher Phi, carry on........