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Um, okay, slightly interesting, adequately sexy, not really humorous, but it is decent, I'll give it an 6.9 out of 10.0. So then, keep in mind humor is good, the little skits fore and aft are interesting, and funny, but it is lacking in etiquiete, wtf ever etiquiete is.... Anyway, continue on, this is CrazyIvan signing off for now.

since you are taking requests...

I was wondering if you could do either, AshXFlannery, AshxWinona or AshxRoxanne. Id love to see one of them

Or maybe even AshxClair...But im leaning toward Ash and Flannery. Either one of those four pairings would be great

hey great story never thought someone would do that but great job

Okay, I just have one thing to take note of... if you, per some INSANE idea, think putting Jasmine with anyone is a good idea, at least alert on the chapter so I can skip it, okay?

That said, it\'s good, even if, well... *stares away dryly* It\'s not that I\'m against humanxPokémon - Hael, I love it too - but it\'s just that your grammar isn\'t so good and there\'s too many clichés.

And cussing.

Oh well, hopefully things get better in other chapters. Seeya.

Loved the chapter! Do you do requests for your stories?

if you ask me, i\'d say this story makes no sense whatsoevr. Nuthn\' but a 1 note type of author. get a life, ya fuckin\' loser.

Wow. I didn\'t think I\'d like that, but it was actually very, *very* well written. It\'s a very interesting pairing (along with your other planned ones)! I hope to see more, as strange as that sounds. Good work.

:D That was absolutly fucking beautifull! I\'d have never believed a Mewtwo x Clair fic could be so well written while still containing sex, and come out amazing, but you really managed to do it! I look forward to you\'re next update!!

Well that was, um, well, uh, yeeah.........
Never before have i seen something like this, and somehow i sense it won\'t be the last. If i wasn\'t so fucking sick from running naked outside in negative 13 degree weather, i\'d track you down and shower you with gifts, of stuff. Anyway, thanks for the dedication, great piece, altough, kind of hard to determine who was speaking at times, even with the communication key, i would still help to seperate paragraphs, and believe you me, i know it can be a bitch, but to better the satisfaction of the readers, this is strongly suggested. Now then, i must be off, got to get smashed as hell so i can not feel this damn cold, Ivan out.

Wow, I\'ve been waiting for this sort of fic for ages! So incredbly hot, and so very well written! :) can\'t wat for more, completely addicted! Great descrptions, excellent materal!!