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by 3Jane

person Kiara
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude, I can SO tell that it isn't going to be Mugen since the decision was over in seconds flat, and I'm hating you for it! ::sobs:: I just know she's going to leave Mugey-darling for Jin! You've been leaning more towards them, anyway. Bah humbug, and all that other irritated crap. lol I mean, SURE, Jin is DEFINITELY more boyfriend material, but he's sooooo effing boring! Every scene with him and Fuu has me snoring because...well...Jin's just a dud. I never cared for him in the series, so maybe that's why i'm being so hard on the poor guy. 'Sides, he has Shino. I thought of them as an OTP, or whatever they're called. He definitely fell hard for that prostitute, so i don't think he could just forget her, especially since he has a "duty" to her. Poor Muges has no one, and I never liked him and Yatsuha. But yeah, a man who goes "hn" and "ah" is rather irritating, and he's so eloquent half the time I'm like...nani??? o_O lol Mugen's a pig, but he's "scruffy sexy" and is actually TRYING to please Fuu, so i think THAT should mean something. :) After all, I definitely can tell Fuu will go back to Jin since the story seems nowhere near over and you wouldn't just pair them off so fast. That, and she hasn't even kissed Mugen in God knows how long! Poor guy...they shared ONE kiss, or one makeout session, hehe, and Jin's trying to jump Fuu's bones every second. Calm down, ya horn dog! :-D But yeah...very nice story, the characterization's awesome, it has a very nice flow, and uh...Mugen/Fuu are the way to go. XD
person anon
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
noooo! i gotta be honest.... i was totally going for jin... *drools at thought of him* fuu is such a little trickster! she totally had me thinking she wanted jin... and whats with all the looks she was supposedly giving him? huh? what about that? alright... no more Nenju drama for me.... not that i can truly keep myself away or anything.
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
In most of the stories for Champloo you can kinda tell which way an author is swinging for a Jin/Mugen/Fuu pairing. With your story I'm so in love with both of them I can't pick which one I prefer, I want them both. Or maybe a blaze of glory ending. I can't tell you are better than the Space Mountian roller coaster at Disneyland. The whole thing is in the dark and all you can do is feel, you don't know when the turns or dips are. I love your writing to a hundred million pieces and stalk...er... read your wonderful blog everyday:)
person Jilliana
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aaaah, Fuugen..tis a beautiful thing. :D
person BlueVixen2071
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haaaa! ::becomes starry-eyed:: *_* That was unexpected, but a very welcome surprise! All this time Fuu's been smooching Jin and flirting with him and ignoring poor Mugen, and yet she chooses HIM?? o_O ::is confused, but happy:: And now Mugen's in trouble! Keep going, keep going! ;0)
person SASSIELASSIE11988
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HELL YEAH!!1 I'M WRITING IN ALL CAPS CUZ I'M SO FRICKIN EXCITED! MUGEN PREVAILS, MUGEN PREVAILS! ALL HAIL TO THE HAWT WONDER THAT HE IS...GOOD CHOICE, FUU! JIN-SAN IS BOOOORING! CUTE, BUT BOOOORING! LOL NO OFFENSE...CONTINUE, DAMMIT! XD
person Silent_Aura
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...hopefully this isn't a pity thing, because that can never end well. I really DO hope that Fuu honestly loves Mugen since he deserves to be loved, but if she's just doing this out of pity, again, all that's going to happen is they'll all end up hurt. And by dammit, if you make Fuu change her mind for Jin, I'll throw a gimungo temper tantrum and tear up this website with my impossibly strong hands!! T_T lol Seriously...PLEASE don't let Mugen fall for Yatsuha so that Fuu goes crawling back to Jin! I'm sick of Jin! No offense Jin lovers...he really is "adorkable", but I think he'd be a rather dull partner to have in life. =-/ Update, please!
person Anonymous
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thank gawd! i was gettin a little tired of jin constantly touching fuu and shit...muges is my boooy!
person Charlotte
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If you kill Mugen, I'll kill you!! lol jk But I WILL be super pissed!!
person jilly
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hm, i wonder if jin will sacrifice himself so that mugen and fuu can be together? that would be so sweet.

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