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by 3Jane

person BlueVixen2071
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gosh darn you! I STILL can't figure out who Fuu's going to choose! You mask everything so perfectly! ::whimpers:: I NEED TO KNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!! I hope it's Mugen! Oh...and I know this is random, but my brother says he wants to get a cow and name it "Moogen"...eheh. -_-' Update ASAP! ^____________^
person Hallie
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bah, Jin overload! Need...more...Mugen! lol Sorry, don't mean to sound like a biyatch and a half - I just find scenes with him to be more exciting. :)
person BLUEVIXEN2071
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHOO, CAPS IS FUN! ANYWHOS, GREAT CHAPTER, AND I THOUGHT IT WAS NICE THAT JIN TOLD FUU THAT HE WANTED TO BE HAPPY, SO HOPEFULLY THAT MEANS...::HINT HINT NUDGE NUDGE:: MUGEN! ::COUGH:: MUGEN! LOL :-D :-D :-D
person Lynnelle R.
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My, what a great story! :) I must admit that I'm a complete Fuugen shipper, but the love triangle makes it much more exciting. I must also admit that I find Jin/Fuu's relationship to be completely platonic - it seemed to me in the series that he merely felt of her as a dear friend and almost a brother-sister relationship. Fuu at some moments seemed to feel more for him, but she also seemed to care a great deal for Mugen. She did, after all, leap in front of Sarah in order to protect him...I love Mugen's expression when she does this because I could tell he wasn't expecting that at all. :) And even though our dear, fire-spirited Mugen doesn't like to admit it, you can tell that he cares a great deal for Fuu, as well. Although he complains about her, he constantly goes out on a limb to save her, even when he doesn't have to. I felt like the Jin/Fuu river scene was about Fuu's attachment to Mugen since she mentioned Mugen, and then Jin gave her a hug out of sympathy. Jin also later on has a flashback about this conversation, only to immediately tell Mugen to go to Fuu since she needs him. Wow...WHY am I lecturing you when you deserve a review! I apologize! :(
All in all, it was a WONDERFUL fic, and I eagerly await more! :)
person BlueVixen2071
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I have returned...and what a LOVELY chapter! ~*~purrs with happiness~*~ Please continue ASAP, or else I'll truly go INSANE!!!
person Hallie
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely job! But I must say that Mugen is beautiful, too! Fuu never told HIM that...I dunno, I just love that passionate glint in his eye when he gets all fired up. :D But then again, I love me some bad boys! Haha Oh! Maybe you could have 2 alternate endings...you know...so everyone's happy? Like have Alternate Ending 1: Mugen/Fuu and Alternate Ending 2: Jin/Fuu...that way people like me will be sure to drown in the Fuugen goodness!! teehee
person Nicole
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. It is so REAL. I can't wait for you to update! Thanks.
person SassieLassie11988
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^___^ Hm, aweseome, awesome! Glad nobody died! lol I was also wondering what became of Yatsuha, so thanks for answering my question. :)
person Silent_aura
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, another beautifully-written chapter - I seriously STILL have no idea who's going to win the fair Fuu's hand! =-P
person BlueVixen2071
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I figured you'd update again while I'm away on vacation, so if so, I KNOW I'm gonna love it! Fuugen forever! X-D

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