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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was great! but i;m a bit lost.....?
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, Jin seemed to be Fuu's favorite the way she did way more with him and it was more poetic, but then she said Mugen's name...hmm. ::is hopeful::
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gah! O_O I didn't expect the ending! Whoever thought Jin would be the one to initiate the blood-shed and Mugen would be the one to attempt the option of not fighting? ^^; The whole Jin/Fuu moment was sweet and all, but I truly hope she picks Mugen! :(
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Most promising work!
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree with BlueVixen...Mugen and Fuu are a lot more entertaining to read about since Jin isn't a man of many words - not saying that the love isn't there, of course. ;0) Things tend to get more hot and exciting with the Ryukyuan, but maybe that's just my love of bad boys speaking. :P
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~*~cheers~*~ Schweet, you've updated! I always wait on pins and frickin' needles! ~*~kicks Yatsuha~*~ Sorry, not a fan. >_> lol Update!
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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oi, what's Yatsuha up to, now?? -_-' I hope Mugen doesn't end up with her, b/c...well...meh. I don't really like her. Besides, I find Fuugen to be so interesting b/c they're complete opposites, thus giving them great chemistry. There's a fiery spark, and I love it. ^^ Jin/Fuu, otoh, is far too docile and...well...rather boring, if I may say so. ^^; I love your story...keep it up!
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww the last two chapters are great! I like how they interact. cant wait for the next chapter!
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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is such a wonderful story. You're character development is spot on. The sexual tension and tenderness is touching. I love this story. Go team 3Jane!
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Phew, that scared me! At first I thought Fuu was going after Jin to get a bath, but then Mugen was there and I thought she was going to kiss him, and then Jin was back and I thought she was going to kiss HIM, and then she kissed neither, but that's still ok. ^^ I have no idea HOW you do it, but you're able to keep the relationships controlled SO damn well! I usually can't hold off too long, so they get together by CH 7, usually. ^____^ MuFuu! lol