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Although it didn't turn out how I wanted it to, it was still gorgeously written and for that I commend you. :) I knew Jin would come back, because c'mon, one more chapter...I seriously doubted you'd end it with everyone mourning and bawling, but who knows? ^^; The only thing I wasn't expecting was Mugen having more than one kid...wow. LoL

COOL, BUT I SKIPPED THE LEMON, HEHE. CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S OVER - NOW I HAVE TO FIND SOMETHING ELSE TO READ...THERE AREN'T ANY GOOD FUUGEN WRITERS ON HERE...WELL...OK, SO THERE are, BUT THEY DON'T UPDATE LIKE YOU DO. SOB, THIS SUCKS...LOL AS SOON AS YATSUHA AND FUU TALKED IN THE LAST CHAPTER, I WAS LIKE, DAMN, YOU KNOW SHE'S GOING TO SINK MUGEN, ESP. WITH THE KID. MEN ARE GULLIBLE THAT WAY, HEHE. I WASN'T SURPRISED WHEN JIN CAME BACK, SO THE ENDING WAS KINDA ANTICLIMATIC, BUT IT WAS STILL VERY GOOD...I TEND TO LIKE THE MORBID/SAD ENDINGS BECAUSE THEY'RE MORE BELIEVABLE, YA KNOW? :) AND...THEY MAKE ME CRY AND CURSE THE AUTHOR/AUTHORESS FOR BEING SO MEAN TO THE POOR CHARACTERS, BUT THOSE ARE THE KINDA STORIES THAT STAY IN MY MIND. THIS WILL PROBABLY STILL BE ONE OF THEM, THOUGH, BECAUSE YOUR STORY MADE ME FEEL SO MANY EMOTIONS - MOST OF THEM WERE NOT VERY NICE, BECAUSE I HATE GETTING ANGSTY CLIFFHANGERS, HAHA - THEY MAKE MY HEART HURT. ^^ I'M SUCH A BABY. HOPE YOU WRITE MORE IN THE FUTURE, AND MAYBE NEXT TIME AROUND SHE'LL CHOOSE MUGEN. XD HEHE

Brava! What a wonderfull finish to Nenju, I have to admit it was a turbulent ride filled with tears and smiles but I'm very happy with the ending. I love that you gave Mugen a passel of daughters that was so cute. Your ending was real and heartfelt and I deeply enjoyed your story.

Oh, God, Jin's hands! That's awful! I have to say I'm glad he's not dead, though. That was a hell of a closer. It actually made me tear up which never, never happens.

Woman, if you end the story with Jin dead, I will have to kill you.

Seriously, though, I love this story. I think I might have reviewed it on FF.Net. I know it's on my favourites list there. As far as I'm concerned, this is, hands down, the best "Samurai Champloo" fic on the net. Everyone is wonderfully in character - yes, even Fuu who has understandably become a lot harder and less innocent after everything she's been through. The story is really original and follows naturally from the series without being just the same ol', same ol'. It's just brilliant, really.

Oy, so very sad. :( Thankfully I was still awake when you posted because of our damn regestering for spring classes, so yeah...bah. -_- As soon as Yatsuha stepped off the ship I was like...SHIT! And then when she said she was pregnant, I went DOUBLE SHIT! lol Gosh, it really doesn't sound like it'll be the end in just one more chapter...it's insane. =-/

Aww, that was cute. I liked how Mugen went out of his way just to bring Fuu the loom with the hopes that she'd be interested in something new. I can't help but feel that it will serve a different purpose... And now that Yatsuha's there I'm surprised how willing Fuu was to make friends with her considering their history, but I suppose her love for Jin made her forget. And since there's one chapter left, Mugen definitely won't get Fuu, and...uh...I don't know. Seems like someone might die. =-/

YOU ROCK SO HARD, BUT IN A SADISTIC SORT OF WAY BECAUSE I'M SURE YOU WANT US TO CRY. LOL XD I AIN'T CAVIN' IN...I REFUSE! I MAY GET ALL TEARY-EYED NOWADAYS, AND SOMETHIN TELLS ME THAT THIS NEXT CHAPTER WILL BE EMOTIONAL, SO I HOPE YOU LET ME DOWN EASY. ^^ HEEHEE PRETTY DESCRIPTIONS AND WHATNOT...BIG SURPRISE THAT THE NINJA-WHORE'S (HA...IT'S ONE WORD WHEN HYPHONATED! XD) PREGNANT (not). I ALWAYS WONDERED WHAT THEY DID BACK THEN ABOUT PROTECTION...PERHAPS ABSTINENCE ACTUALLY was THE ANSWER, HAHA. KEEP GOIN! :0D

My guess is Jin comes back, cuz that's what always happens. lol Good story. ^_^

It's really awesome, but I kinda hope you don't bring Jin back to life. Not because I don't like him, but because it's cliche' and way overdone. Everyone ALWAYS excepts them to come back, and it's just.....unrealistic. Now you've captured everything so beautifully up til now, so I'm sure you'll find a way to make it work. ;-)