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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love love love this fic. You're doing a fantastic job evolving every one. I really like how you are developing Fuu ...its.. just.. so sad! I miss Jin! I miss the smexy Mugen/Fuu action...sniff. Ok I'm ok now. I love every chapter of this story.
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well how lovely! You had me shivering with Fuu and my heart sinking, yet I still loved this chapter. :)
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, whoa, whoa! Although my retinas are bleeding from reading so damn much, this is SO damn good so I honestly can't complain. Except I just did, didn't I? :) Hehe, and I guess after you lose your virginity as a girl you miss the...um..."action", so I suppose that's why Fuu's feeling all lonely around Mugen? lol Good sexual tension and whatnot.
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what an awesome update! ^_^ Somehow this chapter stood out from the rest to me - perhaps it's because they're in a different setting, as simple as that reason may sound, but whatever it was, I really liked it. :) I also agree with Fuu - Jin can't be dead...there are 2 more chapters left! =-P I also feel that you handled Fuu's grieving really well. You pretty much depicted her as I believe Watanabe would in her given situation, and I think you did a beautiful job. I especially liked the part in the beginning when Mugen and Fuu shared that hug and moment of understanding...it made me want to cry. :*(
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PHEW, WASN'T NEARLY AS ANGSTY AS I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE, AND I'M GLAD...REALLY AWESOME THOUGH, I MUST SAY. :0D LOVELY INTERACTIONS!
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-jaw drops- Wow...just wow. You amaze me by how you can write one thing, then progress so far into the future while still making it flow. I often have trouble with that sort of thing, yet you write as though it's a piece of cake! :) Great job and eagerly awaiting the next installment!!
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done, mah dear, but.......O_O??? Is Jin a goner?? Not a nice cliffie at all! XS
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm kind of watching my Dark Shadows DVDs at the same time, and the main girl's over her fallen lover, so in the words of her: "Oh, *Insert Jin's name*, do not die, my love! Do not die!!!" And of course she's got a French accent and Fuu doesn't, but meh, whatever. :) Nenju makes me sob lots of tears (what else would I sob?? :OP), so I hope you continue soon! Angst, angst, angst! XD
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I shall quote some icon I saw, fore it twas funny: "Do NOT have sex, because you will get pregnant and DIE!" XD lol I doubt Fuu will get pregnant (ominous voice: or WILL she??) and I doubt she'll die... -is scared- Right?? No Romeo/Juliet, por favor! Waaay too much for my angst-ridden self to handle! lol Lovely job!!
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, there! :) I had to review again, and...well...I have a teeny tiny confession. ^^ I never really carerd much for Jin, but now you've converted me and I love him to pieces. XP I'm still nowhere near being a Fuu/Jin shipper, but he is very 'huggable' now for me, and I love how you've made all the characters' dynamics so flawless. :D