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by 3Jane

person Silent_Aura
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dammit, I KNEW it! T_T Mugen, you dumbfunk! *Yep, cutting back on my cursing ^^* Bah, I knew Fuu would go for Jin all along, but I still kept hoping...
Why couldn't Mugen be more like the "Mugen" I see in school? -_-' Yep, I actually see someone who looks juuust like him (it freaks me out, but in a good way ^^) - but I kno it could never REALLY be him since I saw him praying one time and he held the door open for me. XD Haaa ::sighs and twirls while humming "There's A Light" to make me feel better for the heartache::
person Vicki
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hm, I don't understand Mugen at all - in the beginning he seemed like he genuinely loved her. Is it just because Fuu won't give her body to him? :( ~~sigh~~
person Mitzi
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it - beautiful update, as always.
person BG
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Te quiero, woman!!! This story is MAGNIFICO!!!
person BlueVixen2071
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are you trying to make us hate Mugen?? :( I'm sure as heck irritated with him - gah, living proof that men think with their winky-dinks. -_-'
person SASSIELASSIE11988
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! -THROTTLES MUGEN- YOU FREAKING IDIIIIOOOOOT! FUU'S GONNA LEAVE YOU, BAKA...QUIT DICKIN AROUND AND GO BACK TO WHERE YOU BELONG! T_T -POUTS- YOU SURE KNOW HOW TO BE EVIL, NEH? LOL JK, BUT IT'S STILL EVIL...I FEEL BAD FOR FUU...OY.
person Kohza
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oy ve, the idiot...but that's our Mugen to a T. :)
person Silent_Aura
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I honestly don't know what to think anymore...the possibilities of who will win Fuu's heart are absolutely endless. =-/
person kashudoreineko
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So... Fuu has chosen Mugen only because she thinks she's soiled and therefore not good enough for Jin? But the pirate who cheats on her is okay for one that is dirty?

That's what I'm picking up from this last chapter. Maybe that's not what you're going for, but that's the subtext I'm seeing.

The political intrigue, however, is constantly catching me off guard. Very intricately done.
person Josette DuPres Collins
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, young love - or...that's what I hope it will be. :) Mugen never seems like one for romance, but I hope that he can find it in his heart to give it his all. Fuu seems to think he's worth it, after all, so he must feel the same!!

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