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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I sure hope Fuu never finds out about Yatsuha! And I hope all that "discomfort" isn't foreshadowing, but then she got comfortable at the end, so I relaxed. Did Jin say that he liked Yuki romantically, or what?? Sometimes the conversations are confusing, but I think I got the gyst of it..
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This, my friend, must be one of the best things I've read in my life. The plot is wonderfully well thought of, it is easy to fit into the ending of the series, as well as the culture and ways of Japan in that time. So excellent!
The plot alone would almost be enough to keep me glued to the screen through the whole thing, but then you add the amazing characterizations! All of the three main-chars are perfect, both in the way they were at the beginning, as well as the way they respond to the happenings in the story, and how they grow. Both as individuals and as a group.
The other characters are wonderful as well. I even find myself fall in love with the OC's, they are very easy to fit in to the story and the Samurai Champloo style.
I absolutely adore this story. Have you written more? Eh... I'll go check your profile ^^
Can I rec it at my website?
Hugs /elict
The plot alone would almost be enough to keep me glued to the screen through the whole thing, but then you add the amazing characterizations! All of the three main-chars are perfect, both in the way they were at the beginning, as well as the way they respond to the happenings in the story, and how they grow. Both as individuals and as a group.
The other characters are wonderful as well. I even find myself fall in love with the OC's, they are very easy to fit in to the story and the Samurai Champloo style.
I absolutely adore this story. Have you written more? Eh... I'll go check your profile ^^
Can I rec it at my website?
Hugs /elict
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gashes are red, bruises are blue, this is how much I love you! ^^ Your story, that is! Yeah, sorry - just thought that sounded like more of a "mugenish" thing to say opposed to some sappy thing. >_> So yeah, nice filler chapter - rather, that's what it SEEMED like it was - so I hope you put up more soon! And yay, I wasn't depressed when reading it this time! Not EXTREMELY depressed, anyway. :)
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oy, why are you doing this to me?? I feel just awful, now...everything's just going wrong, and I HATE reading stuff that makes me feel terrible during my studies/classes. :( I love all the characters, so I feel torn...I hate Yatsuha for ruining everything!!
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Take a bow, the night is over
This masquerade is getting older
Lights are low, the curtain's down
There's no one here
[there's no one here, there's no one in the crowd]
Say your lines but do you feel them?
Do you mean what you say when there's no one around? [no one around]
Watching you, watching me, one lonely star
[one lonely star you don't know who you are]
Chorus:
I've always been in love with you [always with you]
I guess you've always known it's true [you know it's true]
You took my love for granted, why oh why
The show is over, say good-bye
Say good-bye [bye bye], say good-bye
Make them laugh, it comes so easy
When you get to the part
Where you're breaking my heart [breaking my heart]
Hide behind your smile, all the world loves a clown
[just make 'em smile the whole world loves a clown]
Wish you well, I cannot stay
You deserve an award for the role that you played [role that you played]
No more masquerade, you're one lonely star
[one lonely star and you don't know who you are]
(Chorus, repeat)
Say good-bye [bye bye], say good-bye
All the world is a stage [world is a stage]
And everyone has their part [has their part]
But how was I to know which way the story'd go?
How was I to know you'd break
[you'd break, you'd break, you'd break]
You'd break my heart?
I've always been in love with you
[I've always been in love with you]
Guess you've always known
You took my love for granted, why oh why
The show is over, say good-bye
(Chorus)
Say good-bye [bye bye], say good-bye
Say good-bye
- "Take a Bow": Madonna
~*~*I HATE Madonna, but I LOVE this song, and I think it fits this story so well. The interpretation of who this is between is up to you, because I honestly don't know who it is yet, myself. ^^;
This masquerade is getting older
Lights are low, the curtain's down
There's no one here
[there's no one here, there's no one in the crowd]
Say your lines but do you feel them?
Do you mean what you say when there's no one around? [no one around]
Watching you, watching me, one lonely star
[one lonely star you don't know who you are]
Chorus:
I've always been in love with you [always with you]
I guess you've always known it's true [you know it's true]
You took my love for granted, why oh why
The show is over, say good-bye
Say good-bye [bye bye], say good-bye
Make them laugh, it comes so easy
When you get to the part
Where you're breaking my heart [breaking my heart]
Hide behind your smile, all the world loves a clown
[just make 'em smile the whole world loves a clown]
Wish you well, I cannot stay
You deserve an award for the role that you played [role that you played]
No more masquerade, you're one lonely star
[one lonely star and you don't know who you are]
(Chorus, repeat)
Say good-bye [bye bye], say good-bye
All the world is a stage [world is a stage]
And everyone has their part [has their part]
But how was I to know which way the story'd go?
How was I to know you'd break
[you'd break, you'd break, you'd break]
You'd break my heart?
I've always been in love with you
[I've always been in love with you]
Guess you've always known
You took my love for granted, why oh why
The show is over, say good-bye
(Chorus)
Say good-bye [bye bye], say good-bye
Say good-bye
- "Take a Bow": Madonna
~*~*I HATE Madonna, but I LOVE this song, and I think it fits this story so well. The interpretation of who this is between is up to you, because I honestly don't know who it is yet, myself. ^^;
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love how you bring back the secondary characters into this story, very orginal twists.
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. I really don't like how Jin handled the situation since when a woman chooses, that is IT! End of discussion! Poor Mugen had to overhear that crap and now he'll probably lose her because of that final act of desperation! Why do you do this to me?? Why?? :( I'm so incredibly sad right now! I've been able to think of nothing else!!
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice! But evil evil ending!! -shakes fist-
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Agh, DAMMIT! >.< Now Fuu's going to come in and see and she'll turn to Jin!! ::sobs:: You always make my stomach church...ooooyyy. Poor Mugen. :(
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK! NOT JUST FUCK...SUPER FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK! LOL OOPS...STILL IN MY CURSING PHASE FROM THE GAME LAST NIGHT - FAAAART! MUGEN, YOU FOOL! YOU'RE GOING TO LOOSE FUU TO FOUR-EYES, NOW! NO NO NO NO NO! I KNEW THIS WOULD HAPPEN! STUPID WHORE/BITCH/HO/SLUT! ::KICKS ANGRILY:: DAMN YOU...I NEED MORE, AND THERE ISN'T...AAAAAGH! ::TEARS OUT HAIR:: CRAP CRAP CRAP CRAAAAP! THAT DIDN'T END WELL AT ALL! ::CRIES::