rate_review Reviews

Dear Lord, don't stop now! This is wonderful. I grinned like an idiot through the whole thing and nearly fainted at the end. I love it. Don't make me start begging. You are doing a great job, don't put so much pressure on yourself. Just write what is enjoyable to you and it'll be fun for others too! I promise I'll like it.

his was very good i'd like to see more of it and if you need a beta i am available

update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
XDD

this is great! i know you mentioned something about alot of fruits basket fics about them going into heat, but i can only recall on and that was a short oneshot. please update this soon.

please don't stop writing this, i really want to read more, this is the first male pairing that i've read and i have to say i'm quite likeing it so more PLEASE. or if your continuing this story else where please let me know, thank you :D

*holds nose as blood gushes out* U-Update s-soon-n... *swoons*

you need to update!! like ASAP!!! this is a really good story and i cant wait to see waht it was that happened to kyo that he doesnt want gure, aya, and hari to know about!!!

Hotness!!!!!

Kyou is the cutest, so sexy and gruff yet so fuckable...

Shigure should be the first to take him, he does know him the best after all...

:D

The story is wonderful! You have a lot of talent and I am going to enjoy watching your writing evolve more. Your dialogue is spot on, and I think that helps out a great deal in making it so good.

Now, if you don't mind, some constructive criticism: Don't worry about what other people are going to think. If you want to add or leave out details, then do so. Just go over your story once more before you post it to make sure everything makes sense. If you feel you must add an A/N do it at the end of the story as a foot note. Having it in the middle takes away from the wonderful spell you have woven.

Also, see if you can't find some one who will beta for you. You could have them spell check and fix grammatical errors, which would make your writting even stronger.

So. . . UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!

awwwwwwwwwwwww i was enjoying this story and then it had jus go and stop on me please update soon and if u could please email when u do that would be great!