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Continue....pleaseeeeee.....i wanna know what that rumbling is...is kyou hungry? waiiii!!! kyou-chan no kawaii...^^byebye

about time we got an update! yay! i enjoyed the limey lemonness of this chapter, but i've gotta say....quit leavin me hangin!!! i'll also add that too much description is better than not enough, and you're doing fine, so quit apologizing! and blow spell check, if you ever question your spelling of a word, just go to dictionary.com or something. but eff, if we're checking your spelling during a good lemony scene. hah! <3, update soon!

yay! I love that fic! can't wait for the next update!

i love dis story
u need to update faster, da pairing (would dat b foursome? ) is soooo kwl
cant wait 2 c wot happens next...

o.o.....woah.........but whos watchin the house? nd do tohru nd yuki know where they are? also i have a bad feeling about the uhhh rumbling comming from kyo. i hope its not what i think it is nd if it is poor kyo-kun!!!!! ive only seen the anime but they don show their pjs there though. i must say i was drooling reading ur descriptions though!!!!! ok ummm if im being too straigh forward than you can cuss me out in ur next chapter but call me old fashioned but if their mating then shouldnt they have this whole share time thing? lik they each have to share their pasts? i dunno im listening to some sad music that i think would be a perfect backdrop for kyos past. so w/e i just think lovers who share a deep bond (nd had horrible pasts) would do that kinda thing you know to bond nd stuff......ok anyway great story! i luv it anything wit kyo nd the trio i luv especially when mixed! ;)

cute!^^

WWWHOOOOOOO!!! I am just simply LOVING THIS FIC!!! I had to stop myself from giggling soo loudly because my mom was outside!!!

You know, I think that there should be parties when reading stuff like this! I can imagine it now...Me and my friends sitting in front of a wall while the projector's..erm..projecting the chapter. With chips and everything in our hands, of course!!! And still I can imagine all my friends shrieking at those moments.

"AAAAH" Like some crazed fangirls. Who said they weren't, anyway? Hahahah!!

Man!

Now for constructive criticism...

Mmmm...

Some of the words were mispelled. Like definitely, and some stuff.

Thus ends my contructive criticism. I'm too excited to be more analytical!

Might I suggest something? You should really try to put this up on Fanfiction.net. Seriously! Great stuff you have here, great stuff...

Impatiently waiting,

Aoi Umenokouji

ah u so have to finish this story. It's so awesome, I want, no i need to know what happens! Pppplllllleeeeaaazzzzzzzzzeeeeeeee!

Finally you update.I loved this chapter full of Kyou goodness!Cant wait for the next chapter.Keep up the good work and update soon please.

Oh sooo good!!! I love it and I can't wait untill I get to read the rest! You done a great job!!!!!