rate_review Reviews

Another great story of yours which I really liked! The plot was good and so were the portrayal of the characters, good job! The story was also very well written and I thought that both endings were good, although I must say I enjoyed the second one more, hehe!

All in all awesome work!

Gooood Morning! I was half a sleep until I read this. More Please! What a way to wake up!

I LOVE THE ENDING!

i mean sure i'm a fan of happy endings but it just wouldnt suite the story or the couple.....

its fantastic! i loved it!

Now THAT'S how I like to see my man depicted! Raw, cruel, yet with a tender side that's there, yet hardly distinguishable. Very, VERY nice! I think that you've captured Mugen and Fuu's relationship to a "T", and...well...I love it! Nice nice job! :) *Yep, I clearly left my thesaurus at home while reading this -_-'*

man that was good! I wish mugen and fuu can be happy. i wonder if they both died what will jin do? well that's another story in itself...so give me credit! lol

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..*whispers* "I knew it"

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...... all I'm able to say at the moment is ..update soon... */_\*

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Holy crap this is crazy good!!~_^ Really hot and very smart all at the same time!

OMG! I knew it! I KNEW IT! I knew you were going to kill Fuu, I could tell from the second that they stepped onto that ship! *growls* You are a sadist like me! You like to put your characters through hell! *starts sobbing* Mugen! Poor Mugen! I loved this chapter! It was so great, so dark, so awesome! And I personally think he was in perfect character, he'd never say I love you, that's just not Mugen, and I don't think that he'd cry... that much... so you did a very good job! Great as all ways! I wonder what's going to be in the next chapter? I'm sad now... But oh so happy! You nearly made me cry.

THAT'S SO SAD! I thought I was gonna cry when I read that.. Yes.. ye did fooled me.. And i LOVE it! Am still in shock though...
AH! FUU! WAH!

you...how....DARE you....;___;

I'd say I hate you...but you look nothing like my 3rd grade teacher so I'll justs tick to saying that...I really don't like you right now.... my poor little Fuu...... poooooor Mugen........

Excuse me while I go whimper aimlessly in a corner.

Well done.

Now go write the next chapter so i can have some closure.