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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! O_O That was SO sad!! -runs off crying-

Awwww...he finally understand that he likes/ even loves her and she is the one to go. :( I wasn't expecting this. Good writing.

Oye,OYE!! The Chapter was cut off, the chapter was cut off!! Fix it quick!

-- “You ok?” the blonde questioned, her concern only mounting in its intensity as her friend feebly shrugged her shoulders. “Fuu, -- *cries* Please, fix it!!

Thanks for the update..... do it again soon...... <_<

Wow...that was very beautiful and heart-wrenching. I ADORED the scene where Fuu begged Mugen to live for her. It was SO sweet. I also liked how Mugen told her to stay away from him since she could end up getting the disease, too. I also love how Mugen's STILL a hard-ass this far in the story since most authors make him get wimpy when he falls for Fuu, which you haven't done at ALL so far. That's saying a lot, you must realize. I wanted to cry during Kohza's letter (yes, I'm a baby, I know), because it showed her secret motives and made her seem like a really sweet and selfless character. You also filled it in so that these events could've actually transpired on the show, thus making it neat to think that this might have been Kohza's ulterior motive. Loving it! Please update soon!!

I do like your story, though I'm not quite sure I'm fond of the way it's written. I write very choppily, sloppy, and overrated so I have no right to complain, but I ask that you try to tighten details.

thank you for the story non-the-less.

Please continue with it.
~Caesar

......I have no words for this but UPDATE SOON!!

aww Fuu is really trying to get poor Mugen well again. I hope Mugen will finally let Fuu be with him. Great new chapter! Thanks for letting me know. ^^ I like their convos. and Fuu's dedication to helping the one she loves.

Freaking HOT and wonderful plot!!

Another good chapter, a bit short, since i enjoy long ones but i like it anyways. ^^ Aww mugen was so mean to Fuu..She should get back at him for that. This time i'm on her side lol. Keep the great work! ^_^ I hope u will continue cuz i'm reading ^0^ and want to know how it all ends. Can't wait for more.