rate_review Reviews

You should continue. This sounds so interesting.

Okay...I'm hooked. I completely buy the set-up and I really hope you decide to continue. I'm curious to see where it goes.

Awesome story you have started here. I love the whole new concept and I would love to read more soon again. Please do continue writing this, I would love to see what happens next. Already it seems like a novel that I would have bought from a store to read. Only one small thing though, whenever new dialogue is started you should start a new paragraph, even if it is only one sentence long, that makes it a lil easier to read who is saying what. Towards the end it was hard to tell Hakkai from Sanzo\'s speech at first.

But otherwise this is a good fic and I\'d love to see it continued.

~IceAngel~

Also I think you have this uploaded twice....