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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omfg! That was awesome! I can't wait to see more work from you! -lots of love- <333333333333333333
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice.
Your detail is pleasantly soothing at times, more in the beginning, and builds up along with the tension in order to grasp the frustration.
I think though, that somewhere in the middle, the blocks of text are just a little too long for their own good. If you separate your paragraphs a little more, it will make it a lot easier to read.
Aside from that, kudos.
xx
Your detail is pleasantly soothing at times, more in the beginning, and builds up along with the tension in order to grasp the frustration.
I think though, that somewhere in the middle, the blocks of text are just a little too long for their own good. If you separate your paragraphs a little more, it will make it a lot easier to read.
Aside from that, kudos.
xx
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June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!! GREAT STORY!! SERIOUSLY ONE OF THE BEST I'VE READ, GOOD JOB!
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June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hotness!!! *drools* If anyone flames you they are stupid. So Muraki. He would do something like that. Anywho, total hotness and I\'m going to go look up your other work now. *dashes to do so, says over shoulder* Loved it. Keep writing please.
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May 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mmm... ~so~ tasty. **shivers in delight**
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May 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg! Such a lovely story! And this is your first fanfic you say? They way you wrote this I would have thought you have been writing fanfic for years. Not too many good Murakix Tsuzuki fanfics out there. It\'s epsecially hard to find ones where they are still in character. Hope you write more YNM fics.
Do you do requests by any chance? o.o
Do you do requests by any chance? o.o