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for If You Want Something Done...

by burnedvamp

person Crimson_Enigma
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, this made me giggle quite a bit XD Kudos to you!
person quamp
schedule May 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A good story overall. The only improvement I can suggest is this: your apostrophe\'s uploaded wrong (they turned into O with a tilde on top.) You might want to fix that.
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