rate_review Reviews

Aw! That was sweet! I like it!

I liked it very much. It was short and sweet. I think u did a wonderful job with Takashi.

Lovely story.
=)

awww sooo cute!
Hibiskiss want more!

I wonder what is truly on the menu? I hope to see more of the test garden soon. I love how the story is written.

Yeah! OMG! This chapter was good! I can't wait for the next one to come out!

You're writing is very enjoyable, and this is my second favorite pairing! I see great potential in this story, even so early on, and I hope to see more of it. <3

This fic of yours is anything but R. Very well written, yes. Characters realistic? Of course. But honestly, this does not belong on AFF.net. It's just too...fluffy and pure. Don't get me wrong, your writing style is captivating and I enjoy reading your works, but people come to this site to read smut. And unfortunately...this isn't.

Your mission, if you choose to accept, is to write a smutty, lemony fic. With Haruhi and any one (or two) of the club members.

Back to your fic, I think that you captured Mori-kun's essence perfectly. I like how you mentioned his deep laugh and caring disposition. And Hunny's apporval at the end was worth reading. Good job.

But seriously, this is not R. Maybe K+ at the mention of Mori's non-existent underwear.

Wow, I really love this fic, please continue if you could! ^__^

... reviews are a writers wet dream? alright then.

I liked it. The writing kind of implies that Mori and Haruhi have some kind of relationship outside of the host club. I await more. lol