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I really enjoyed this. Your characterizations of an older Misao and a more relaxed Aoshi are very apt and believable. You draw a perfect balance between description ("worldbuilding") and getting on with the story, dragging me in and keeping me there through the end.

My only two critiques are thus:
-You refer to Sakura as Suzuki's woman who he visits twice a week, but later in the story, he's never met Sakura and is waiting for Kanoko.
-The use of cherry blossoms in anime fanfic is a little overdone - with Misao acting so mature, strong, and savvy, hasn't she matured into smelling like, perhaps, peonies or ylang?

Wonderful fic, instant favorite.

That was an awsome story! Keep it up!

I love reading your fics..so well written....I leave feeling that your scenarios are very plausible. That those characters may very well have behaved that way in those situations or said those things. Kudos!

Methinks Aoshi is the perfect hot & cold combo Happy Meal. yum:)

I loved the story. Very sweet. I love how Aoshi opened up without losing his more secretive ways. Great job!

You're so good!!! I like this fic a lot it's surprisingly in character and interesting and I'm very impressed! Please keep up with this great work!

Set Chan

Very sexy situation..please continue!

one could feel the building tension throughout your story... thick, viscous... the last scene had a very erotic quality... i am of the opinion that the hint/ tease is more sensual than the blow by blow discription- vulgar in comparison.

your descriptions were so very well done.

i am new here and i'm not sure if there are alerts when an author updates, i guess i have to check on this story regularly.

Love this story! I like how Misao and Aoshi are characterized. Great story, nice plot, and very well written. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and hopefully you'll be able to get that out soon. Keep up the good work!

I am an idiot for forgetting to review while begging for other fics. I like the characterizations of Aoshi and Misao- believable and quite consistent with what I expect them. Misao tends to be written as this crazy little girl while Aoshi is either a boring ice block or wildly OOC but I thought you hit a nice balance with both of them. I am also pleased you didn't have them fling themselves into each other's arms pronto- although I like AxM I prefer it as a pairing in progress, for when Aoshi has figured himself out a bit and Misao has grown up a bit. This story had that sense of hope. Kudos, author!

Gretel-chan,

I don\'t know where the rest of your RK fics are here but I am dying to know what is going on in them (particularly \"what you don\'t know\"). Do you have a mediaminer account too? Post there as well so that we can enjoy your work.