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for Things in the Sheets: Revisited

by happyonna

schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is good and i would really like you to continue. who will end up having the talk with tohru? i can see shigure passing the responsibility to somebody else. i dont think that shigure/tohru would be good as a continuation, i would like to find out what happens when they find out haru was there. does tohru get pregnant? please update soon.
person toodles
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! i love it! i absolutely love it!! massage....hehehehe thats great. every one was wonderfully in character and i thank you for the laugh!
person murray the leprechaun(too lazy to sign in)
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Murray here! again! another lovely and funny chapter, actually, i accidentally woke the sleeping hubbie cuz i was laughing so hard, mostly because of an inside joke about "the thing" that would make blondie turn bright red if he weren't too busy snoring. See, when i first started dating the now hubbie, i used to tease him that i had a "thing" (really it was just a piece of really naughty lingerie my best friends had bought me for christmas >.<) and he had no clue what it was and it drove him crazy for months...ok babbling now, sorry, i do that from time to time. anyway, loved the chapter, keep up the good work chickadee!!!

love from murray and blondie
person murray the leprechaun(too lazy to sign in)
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol i bet you're getting sick of my hyper little self by now but oh well cuz i love your story and i looove to review stories i love so get used to lots of praise and random babble from this little irish girl! woke blondie again cuz i was laughing so hard so this time he stayed up and read over my shoulder, turned bright red and promptly went back under the covers telling me i really needed to go to sleep XD guess i should do as he said but i'm eagerly awaiting your next chapter!!

love from murray and blondie
person Ruka
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this seems really really promissing! please update soon!
person neko-chan
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
xDDDDDDD Oh,god,this is too funny1I was so cracked!:DDDD The part with Kyo entering!!!!Oh my,my belly hurts!Please,continue thi1It`s awesoem!
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I laughed so hard tears ran down my cheeks! I'm still giggling. I can only imagine how Shigure will give Tohru "the talk" *snort* Please update soon, and please email me when you do. I can't wait to read more of your story!
person Vampmistress76
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. GOD! This is soo, so hilarious and I just can't wait for you to update! Everyone seems in character and I loved that you brought Hatori in. He's my favorite Zodiac member and my favorite to be paired with Tohru. Shigure is the second. I hope that after the Geruru, you consider adding some Toriru, or maybe even some threesome action with Shigure/Tohru/Hatori. *sighs dreamily* Please update this soon, okay? And email me when you do, I'll be looking forward to it!

Rose-chan
person Jax
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved it! its halarious...you should have a part where shigure finds out about what haru did when he found her...;) update soon! ja ne!
person wynter89
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh noooo it cant end there.... it was just getting interesting.
i really like this fic... lol... i love the situation you put them in... lol...
shigure is sure going to have a hard time with this.
good luck
i hope you update soon

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