rate_review Reviews

Excellent~! I love how you set this entire fic up. It's very believable because you keep both
of them in character. The images I got while reading this were very vivid also because you have a dynamic and beautiful style of writing. You really tell the story well and suck the reader right in! In your story, I enjoyed how Tetheus probes Ruwalk for answers about his strong concern about Alfeegi's death even though Kaistern had been the one who had died more recently. This was a clever way to reveal that Alfeegi and Ruwalk were lovers. I also loved the part where Ruwalk begs Tetheus to help him forget and Tetheus replies that he'll "distract" him until he's ready. What a nice distraction indeed~! The lemon was really top rate! And it was full of interesting surprises too. For example, it's neat how Tetheus has a piercing and Ruwalk was the one giving it to Alfeegi. Whenever I think of Ruwalk and Alfeegi, I always imagine Alfeegi being the dominate one. It was nice to see the roles reversed for a change. Thanks for writing a great fic! I hope to see more from you in the future!