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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't give up, keep on with the fic ... you have me hooked! I like the way the story is developing, even though chapt 8 was a bit too angsty for me but I like how you are writing each character. Your plot developmnent is great and can't wait to read the next chapts. Remember, you do have fans out there waiting to read more.
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you haven't given up on this story; I can't wait to see what effect Goku's blood will have on Hakkai! :)
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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I can't say any more than I loved it, especially Hakkai's internal monologue. Just lovely.
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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ACK! how dare you leave it like that :D I must say when I first started reading this story i wasn't sure I liked it but now....now I can't wait for the next chapters. You're going an awesome job. I love your potryal of Hakkai's darker side and yet you still keep him so in character, actually this goes for the others as well. This last chapter (6) really showed that well in their reactions.
Please continue soon
AISLIN
Please continue soon
AISLIN
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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story is really compelling. I like Hakkai as a character, and you have really got his self-deprecating inner monologue down. The sexual interaction between Hakkai and Gojyo is great, and I'm eagerly anticipating where you take this next.
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June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the enjoyable story. Your words flow well, and the plot is engaging. I can tell you have a good grasp of both the Saiyuki universe and the motivations of its characters.
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June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow! you really must continue this as soon as possible! And from the other reviewer, i agree, Hakkai seems like the most unstable and it's interesting to see what happens! best of luck and update soon!
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June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I still love how this story is going. Hakkai (and Sanzo) have always seemed the two least stable of the group. I could easily imagine just how bad it would be if Hakkai were to finally 'lose it'.
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June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this idea. marvelous. please continue!
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June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I\'m lookig forward to seeing where you go with this!