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June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting. I like how you are taking your time building what is going on between Hakkai, himself, and the others. It\'s very interesting. I\'m wondering though if you\'re having some kind of formatting issue? Your quote marks look like question marks. Doesn\'t detract from the good writing, just something I noticed. Keep it up!
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June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Never mind on the question mark comment - my browser settings were fooged! Great story, pls continue.
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June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very good start to your fic. Not OCC at all, at least not that I see at this point. Post more, please ^_^.