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June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"...others were already suffering from withdraw(al)." Please fix this, if u like.
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June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Usagi's last name is "Tsukino." But "Yukino" is also nice.
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June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, sorry.
"Yukino" is the name of one of the two girls who just entered the club. My bad.
By the way, the vomitting scene reminds me of the Eminem in "8 Mile." :P
"Yukino" is the name of one of the two girls who just entered the club. My bad.
By the way, the vomitting scene reminds me of the Eminem in "8 Mile." :P
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June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"There was no (degust) or contempt in her gaze." If u like, please correct as "disgust."
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June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your latest chapter ROX!
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June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved it cant wait 4 the next chapter update soon plz
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June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow someone did answer and it cam out realy good i would like you to write more
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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, Serena is in trouble.... I foresee a possible rape followed by the rest of the gang coming storming in for the rescue! Or not. I eagerly await the next chapter, and out of curiosity, will you ever continue "Ensnared", or did that plot bunny die a sudden and unfortunate death? Well, laters.
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June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey!! great chapter, send in the next one soon!!
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June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?