schedule
June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok... . I have read a lot of fan ficfion and I h ave written fan fiction but this story was fra from ready to be published. It has not been thought out at all. There misspellings, wrong scquences and plot problems. This author has not ever had sex and has never thought it through or just got in a hurry to put this on the web. Next time if you are going to write pwp
schedule
June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok... . I have read a lot of fan ficfion and I h ave written fan fiction but this story was fra from ready to be published. It has not been thought out at all. There misspellings, wrong scquences and plot problems. This author has not ever had sex and has never thought it through or just got in a hurry to put this on the web. Next time if you are going to write pwp
schedule
June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok... . I have read a lot of fan ficfion and I h ave written fan fiction but this story was fra from ready to be published. It has not been thought out at all. There misspellings, wrong scquences and plot problems. This author has not ever had sex and has never thought it through or just got in a hurry to put this on the web. Next time if you are going to write pwp