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by BlackberryPatch

schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely excellent. It's been a while since I've read this, and so I had several chapters to read.... there's an elegant mix of horror and romance and mystery, heady and sweet as the Pet Shop's incense. I'm pleased to have spent time reading this, and I consider it time well-spent, just as all time reading Pet Shop of Horrors is time well-spent. There are ideas carried forth in here that build on what the manga laid down... and I have to say that I like what you've done with the place.

Carry on, for as long as the tiger takes you, my dear writer. I look forward to seeing it.
person Nami
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. It could have almost been a stand alone, and it said so much and it said it well. D and his changing feelings, the realization that he has changed and Leon just being there to snore. It was all very well written and peaceful, and also delightfully lonely. I know I've had times when I'd be sitting on a subway alone, and think I'm the only one in the world, but it's pleasant and calming. It felt like that here. It's just D and Leon sleeping, and the rest can be thought about later. I can't wait for the next chapter.
person mm-chan
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i've been extraordinarily lazy to review as much as i should....and right now my brain is too tired to properly form the words to give you a decent review...just know that i absolutely love this story!
person Klebkatt (not logged in)
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Me plus your story equals: <3 a thousand times over and an explosion of the offical Squee Meter.

I love how you potray Daddy D, and I'm interested in his motovations to sexually torment Leon (Kleb is a Daddy D/Leon fan). I mean, Daddy D could do other things to him that could hurt him just as bad other then the sex, and his own words in chapter six: "Why is he so... intrigued? I can't help but wonder- what is the fascination?" -- I wonder if he'll stubornly become jelous of his son <3...or even start focusing on his own son XD (Daddy D/Count D shipper as well)

Don't mind me, I'm just rambling (and planting evil sujestions >XD). Please continue with this excellent work!

--Klebkatt
person Klebkatt (not logged in)
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, darn! It cut off my review. :(
person Nami
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I did a little happy dance in my chair when I saw you updated this! The plot line is so beautiful and deep and interesting! I can't say I've run into many fics in any fandom like this one. I can't can't wait to read the next chapter!
person Klebkatt (not logged in)
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, yay! I remember way back when this story was only one chapter. ^^ I'm so glad that I found it again!

saddly, I'm about to passout from lack of sleep, so I must be off and come back tomarrow and read the rest of your beautiful story!

Klebkatt
person Miros
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This. Is. Awesome. I'm so happy you updated! It's so well put together and now I'm all giddy as to how they'll develop. I can't wait for the next part.
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! New chapter! I really love this story. Poor Leon..
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! You are an amazing writer! Finally someone recognizes the greatness of this pairing.

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