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for Stepping Stones

by Scottishfae

person Meggie
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Squee! I love Tamaki! Your writing is superb. Usually I just skim over fics, but yours I was compelled to read each sentence. Please continue this!
person zim
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww that was such a wonderful bit of fluff. I love fluff *curls up in fluff* I wish I could write like that... but I can't! So I'll keep reading wonderful fics like this.
person Kura
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cute story ^^ Not telling us at all who it is, eh?

I'm thinking Tamaki from the content and tone in which he talks ... I thought of the twins when reading about Haruhi writing "their names" in the water, but after read the rest of the story, with the tone shifting dominantly to make me think of Tamaki, I thought of maybe the "their name" refered to Haruhi and his name ... since lovers do like to write their names together ^^

Though, the voice is not too flamboyant to totally discount the twins. It could have be Hikaru easily too, since Hikaru has a very straight forward attitude. Kaoru is more reserved, and similarly I feel that Kyoya might be too reserved.

But then again, who says the reserved ones can't have a playful side as well? ^___~

Will you ever tell who it is? Or purely leave it up to the reader's imagination?
person Akira
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was good. I really liked it. I want to know who it actually was though. My guess is Hikaru but Tamaki was a close second. Good job ^_^
person flynfreako
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
haha awesome! X33 very good writing :3
person inuyashalove04
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...nice story. I really liked it.
person C
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Tamaki? It's Tamaki, right? :O Considering the 'perfect' comment and all.. Anyway, very nicely orchestrated piece. I hope you update it soon and spread the love of Ouran further. :)
person Ally Cat
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SOOOOOOOOO SWEET^_^ I guessed the mystery man is Tamaki it sounds just like him ^_^ but for a minute I thought it could be one of the Hitachiin brothers Who is it??
Anyway EXCELLENT Job ^_^ Hope to read more of your fabulous work ^_^
person LostInLife
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a really nicely written story and I agree that while you didn't really give anything away as to who it was, it must be one of the Twins. After all, she was writing "their names", so only two people have the same name. Am I close? ^_^ PLEASE continue. Don't leave it a one-shot! I love your writing style so I want more!! :P
person kashudoreineko
schedule June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this wasn't fair! You never said which member it was. And although the tone hinted it may have been Tamaki, it could have been Kyoya or Mori just as easily. I wanna know who you meant it to be!!!!!

Very well written, btw. I really enjoyed it.

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