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I really like this story line. It's pretty good. But if you would like, I could edit your chapters that I saw needed to be fixed up. ^_^ As for the beta before you post, I think you just have to get someone to beta all your stories and it'll go to them first. But that's just me guessing. >_< Anyways. Good job! Can't wait for the next update.

Well, most of the time you just acquire a beta reader as you write your story. Or you post the first chapter and appeal for one. There are websites you can find for beta readers but I have found it hard to find one for slash stories before I have published them. You could always just leave a message like a challenge for one here or do a search. Most fanfiction writers I know though have come across beta readers through friendships through message boards or just through conversations with like-minded people.

Why are you looking for a beta? I have not noticed anything particularly wrong with the chapters you produce. Actually, Demon's Den is one of the most grammatically correct stories that I am reading at the moment. Neither Ryo or Dee seem to go out of character too much either. Its a story I enjoy reading and look forward to the updates as it is written in a very professional manner.

What are you wanting beta read?

Eirinn

Mother Lane is a HUNTER! Wow, I didn't see that one coming. Update soon!

I really like this story, and I'm glad you're still updating. For some reason, good vamp stories never seem to stay up for very long. Thanks for writing!

>_< ZOMFGUH! I LOVE IT! -does FAKE dance that involves a weird shake thing-y- I knew Puppet Master was from Trinity Blood (yes, he's damn Sexah!) I like Sword Dancer though too, he's just so awesome! Anywhoo, GREAT fic so far (although I hate when Berkie is the bad guy)and I can't wait to read more! Ryo is such a cutie! (and I feel so sorry for him. T^T My poor darling!) >.< I wish Dee would go werewolf on Rose's ass and then still be in love with Ryo and be like one of those "UnderWorld" twists you know? I just want them to be happy! (Fucking JJ, I've always hated him) (Leo's so cool though...) Oops, rambling! <3 the story, update soon!

Love your story! please update Asap!

AWWW, are they going to go meet Mother? I love her! good story btw. I'm a littl frightened to find out what JJ has up his sleeve. hmmmm, ANYWAY! can't wait for an update! Later.

Mmmm Lime ;-)
Thouse two in the kitchen will be fun.
But what will happen with the stranger from the last chapter?

Oh damn who was watching JJ??? That completely sucks but on the uphand Dee kissed Ryo...twice. Really like this fiction so I hope for an update soon, or whenever you get around to it.

hey I just noticed your story and I like it a lot. It was nice that you didn't new what exactly was going on at the beginning.
And who follows them? Rose? J.J.? The werewolf? And why isn't Dee a werewolf? And why does Ryo feel submissiv to Dee? And how will they get rid off Rose?
You see I need a lot of story!
Have a nice holiday and enjoy the sun for me too ;-)