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for The Demon's Den

by MrsTsukiyono

person Raven Black
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. Not enough vampire fics out there. Poor Ryo though. well I can't wait for more. Have fun in Greece!!!
person sumblink2
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.....OMG!!!! SO GOOD I wanted to cry for Ryo and then congrat him for talking like that to Rose. Oh man I can't wait for the game too! What is Dee planing now for him know that Ryo called him! So excited I can't wait. Update please.
person Anon
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Like always.... WONDERFUL JOB! You really captured the struggle that Ryo was forced to go through while watching Diana and her pray. Making Rose mad was not a good idea on Ryo's part, and now I'm worrried for Dee. Somehow a vampire master vs a human with a little pistal does not seem good odds. Well can't wait till the next chapter, hopefully with a little dee/ryo smut! (just for fun! hint hint) lol
person TimeFlys
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Like always.... WONDERFUL JOB! You really captured the struggle that Ryo was forced to go through while watching Diana and her pray. Making Rose mad was not a good idea on Ryo's part, and now I'm worrried for Dee. Somehow a vampire master vs a human with a little pistal does not seem good odds. Well can't wait till the next chapter, hopefully with a little dee/ryo smut! (just for fun! hint hint) lol
(Sorry for the double post! I got so excited with writing the review that I forgot type my PenName. lol)
person sumblink2
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!! You updated!!! I like that you put the story in some oen else's POV It was different-ish, well....iy was cool, PLEASE UPDATE SOON-er,
person TimeFlys
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Once again I really enjoyed it. You really captured the inner struggle that Ryo is forced to go through. Some scence were a little to graphic for my taste, but where still writen well. (it was scary how easly I could picture every detail in the torture scence.) My only hopes are that: A.) You continue to write this well through-out the rest of this story
B.) Update soon
C.) Still have a happy ending for Ryo and Dee by the end of the story
Keep up the good work!
person Jadehex
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well happy birthday too you I hope you enjoyed it!

I loved the chapter, it would seem things are starting to heat up a little on Ryo's end. He knows he wants Dee but does dee feel the same way? And what's he going to think when he finds out the truth? I don't know but I can't wait to find out either
person sumblink2
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MAn this story just keeps getting better and better, Please UPDATE SOON ans I'm glad you found a beta, now you can start writting chapters more often...I hope?
Jk <:o)
person TimeFlys
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!! For a gift i give you a big kiss- from Ryo!! ( Pushes Ryo forward) "No!!!!! He's mine! (Dee) Dee you should share (TimeFlys) NO!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well i tried.... hope you still have a great birthday, and good job on your latest chapter!
person ShadowofLight
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wowee!! i luv it!! hell i'd rather be kissed by a toad then Rose *shudders* But Dee got bitten by a werewolf? Does this mean he might be one too? Well whatever he is I really hope he and Ryo end up together. And Bikky, aye that was really sweet of him to try and help Ryo out. Wish there was a safer way for him but ya know, still kinda sweet :) Luv ur fic!!

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