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Definately good! So Dee and Bikky are both humans but many of the others are vampires and what not. okay this should be good.
I wonder when Dee is going to figure Ryo is a vampire. I don't think he'd care personally, I mean, I think he'd be like Bikky wanting to help look out for him. This is definately good I hope there is more soon!

Fun story! A few typos here and there, but the I found the plot to be entertaining. I really enjoyed the Ryo and Berkley scenes, and I look forward to more interaction between Dee and Ryo. I look forward to reading more! Please continue writing this!

OMG!!!!
You just have to update soon PLEASE!!!!!
So good! So great. Please update soon
Sooo soon that it should be now!!!
Keep up the good work. <:o)

This looks like an interesting idea, but you really need a beta to catch things like apostrophes, capitalization, etc. For example, "allot" is incorrect the way you've used it.

I know this is AU and all, but I see fangirl/boy Japanese sneaking in. It's not necessary and is usually just annoying, especially in FAKE.

All in all, this is a promising start and I will be interested to read more.