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OMG! no please tell me that you have not quit on this fic. I love it. I was so interested on what is going to happen next and bam no more NOOOOO!

This fic was perfect. You made my mind complete transfixed on every word and action.

please update. { begs }

You are too talented. I spent an hour wiping drool off my keyboards. Is it wrong I laugh at Hisoka's misery? Please continue!

*drools all over the keyboard from hotness*
i definitively praise you on your story X3
just hope he won't listen too much to hisoka and/or angst somewhere *lol*
i'll be watching you! XD

Though set within the anime, your 'What If' fanfiction flows well with the original story. You portray the characters wonderfully and your style of writing is impeckable. The descriptions within the text are vivid and word use and grammar are lovely. I throughly enjoyed this story, unlike many other Yami No Matsuei fictions that I have ventured to read in the past. Please keep writing.

-- Yuki Tsukiyo

more please i love the story and i hope you will have more chapter please more .

Holy shite! Another MurxTsu fic! Thank you so much! We need more of this pair!

Write more please!

AWWW...poor Tsuzuki. What will he do about Muraki?? MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! Please update SOON. Btw...GREAT STORY!!!

Ooh la la...I am enjoying this very much. ^^

Oh my gosh! The plot thickens! You're on a roll, it seems. ^^ I'm thrilled that you're continuing this little drama...and I love that Tsuzuki defended Muraki! Yeah, Hisoka has his reasons, but gosh darn it, Muraki and Tsuzuki are GOOD together!^^

Maybe when Tsuzuki tells of his confrontation with Hisoka to Muraki, Muraki suggests that they shouldn't see each other anymore, much to the doctor's anguish...and Tsuzuki will see the logic in that, but, his heart, too, his breaking! An angsty scene...and then Tsuzuki will realize he can't walk away from Muraki...and then..a lemony REUNION!!

Well, that's my take on it...^^ Keep writing, pleeeeze, you're doing great!

Wheee! Another review since you posted three chapter, I should post three reviews...Okay, Midnight was touching...Tsuzuki gathering up his things and not wanting to leave...Muraki being happy for those two days...wanting Tsuzuki to stay..yikes, but you write a poignant scene.^^ MORE, PLEEZE!! I wrote that Muraki suggest that he and Tsuzuki part for the sake of Hisoka..a temporary parting as their feelings grow stronger and their yearnings deepen...

Of course, a lemon should come first before the parting!^^

Are you posting this story anywhere else? 'Cause other Muraki/Tsuzuki needs to see it!