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Thanks, quinta, for the shout out!^^ I'm glad Eiri took my suggestion and ran with it! I wonder how much of a thorn Hisoka will be...not being a Hisoka fan I find myself liking your version of him in that I'm feeling his anger and hurt and Tsuzuki's "betrayal". But, that doesn't prevent me from wanting a happy ending for Muraki and Tsuzuki!

How about a wedding!!!! Too much??? ^^

Jollyolly, I love your enthusiasm! I was all smiles reading your review. I highly support your idea of a lemony reunion. *grin* Yes, yes. A brief unwanted parting would make the reunion even sweeter. Muraki letting go for the sake of his partnership/friendship with Hisoka and Tsuzuki being angsty. (It's so hard for me to picture Muraki letting Tsuzuki go for long. I imagine him being so posessive. He has what he wants and I want him to keep it that way! Ha!) Damn Hisoka for being in the way. Oh gosh, I am such a Hisoka hater sometimes! Hahaha! *pause* Oh and a wedding, that would be fun.

So Eiri... I'm thinking out loud here: maybe you could include some contact with Tatsumi. Maybe he could check in on them, perhaps by phone or something. Then show Hisoka have a hard time telling the 'whole' situation or something. Also Tsuzuki maybe could reflect more on Muraki and thier tryst, all the while coming to a decision on his feelings. *thinking* Maybe Muraki's 'plans' could possibly not go through all the way for some reason or another. *grumbles* And last but not least, more lemon. Heh. Ahh, well hmmm, that all I got so far. A bunch of maybes, alsos and somethings. Kind of Vague? Yeah. Hope it can help a bit, if at all though. Well, looking forward to what you conjure in the next chapters. Loving it so far, needless to say.

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*sigh* After your previous update, I had checked backed daily. Your startling disappearance had me reeling. Then... BAM!!! I was grinning ear to ear. I am ecstatic that you have returned for an update. And what an update!! Oh yes! *sings* 'These are a few of my favorite things...' Strawberries, whipped cream, chocolate, and MurakixTsuzuki. Hahaha, quite a lovely little tryst. I'm a sucker for romanticism. I totally want for Muraki and Tsuzuki to have a 'happy ending,' whatever that may be. Perhaps, for my own satisfaction and those who may share my sentiment as well. However, Muraki's 'plans' have me worried about there future. Meh, what's a romance like this, between two people such as them, peppered without a little struggle. I'll tell you what. Kinda boring. The struggle keeps me interested and wanting to know more; always looking for the best possible outcome with the given variables. It only makes the end that much more satisfying. (Totally went off on a tangent in the last few sentences. *shakes head* I know.)

Also, I liked seeing Tsuzuki defending Muraki. Shout out to Jollyolly for suggesting that. I wish I could give some good suggestions too. :smileysadandlackingcreativityforthetimebeing: However, I believe in your ability as a writer. As many fics as I have read, some people never cease to amaze me with there creativity.

Okay, I realize I just typed alot. Heh, oh well. Can't wait for more. Au revoir!

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YES A UPDATE~! *dies from smexyness* Very good chapter, it was worth the wait! Can't wait to see more~

This is story is great. Please let Muraki and Tsuzuki stay together. I love their pairings. It is a great story. :) Please update soon. :) I need more and need to know what is going to happen. :) I love the way you write. It is great, keep up the great work. :)

Please don't let Muraki and Tsuzuki break apart. I love them together. :) Well, keep up the great work. :)

Yeah, Tsuzuki for telling Hisoka off. Please let Muraki be with Tsuzuki. The story is great. Update soon. :) :)

Wow...three more chapters so soon~ @.@ *glomps you to death* XD Absolutely love you right now! I sense that something bad will happen soon...can't wait to see more!

YAY! I was beginning to worry a bit as it has been a while since the last one...but this chapter MORE than makes up for the wait!!^^ Very lovely and steamy and romantic! You definitely have a way of building up the tension in a scene...and Hooray for Muraki! His fantasy came true! But can this be the end?? Will there be a Hisoka confrontation? That would be something...Tsuzuki defending Muraki!

Oj, that was soo romantic! At first I mean, then it was HAWT! I luv it! You really make the situations easy to imagine.
I hope there's more updates to come^^