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for Eden

by Eiri

person Shadow Raven
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing....its just...wow. I read another story that basically had the same plot, but your story was Way Way Way Better. ^_^ I still have butterflies fluttering around in my stomach from that story....and Muraki and Tsuzaki were perfect especially during the deliciously long sex scene. *_* Anyway, I can't wait to read the sequel! ^0^
Till' Next Time,
Shadow Raven
person L.D.G
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh...you don't understand how this story changed my life. I'm so about to go watch yami no matsuei again and again and again. I really love MurakixTsuzuki pairing. It's one of my favorite yaoi pairings of all time. You managed to keep both of them in character, which was wonderful. I hope you could maybe do a conutation from this? Somehow? o.o Or do another story involving these two. There's not enough well written stories between these two. Serious.
person Jollyolly
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW, Indeed, Tsuzuki! Totally great and hot and steamy story..thanks so much for writing a Muraki/Tusuzki fic as I'm sick of Tsuzuki/Hisoka stuff...You gotta write a sequel to this...maybe Tsuzuki meeting the doctor for another encounter..?

I'd like my cookie now...^^
person Selina
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just. . . wow. I've never seen Muraki act like that before, but I liked it! And you're right, this ending is much better than the one where Hisoka interrupts.
person wetheril
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was incredibly hot. I'd been wanting to read this kind of Muraki/Tsuzuki fic for a long time, and wow...this was perfect. Keep up the good work. :)
person Anon
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was hott!!!
I love it when people do alternate scenes of things...
I was half-expecting Hisoka to interrupt them after though...lol
Anyway, lovely ficcy. Love Muraki's characterization.
person blisblop
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
They do have an insane charisma for each other.Its soothing to read such a sensual coupling between the two.Bingo!
person fyrbyrd
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, thank you very much, absolutely loved it.
person Shuichi
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O You. Rawk. My. Dirty. Socks. Clean. Seriously. Spotless.
That moment was intense in the Anime..then you go..and make it...PERFECT.
Everything. Mind-numbing and just made me want to scream. I think you should copyright it and make it as a prequel to what can happen when you loose to an evil scientist (German >.<) The sex scene made me drool, it was melting my eyes. I had an eye orgasm.
I think.
You.
Should.
Do.
That.
more.
Often.
It is so beautiful how you put two gorgeous men in such a situation then have one be screwed to every point of pleasure you can possibly think of.
*tear.* I am so proud of you.

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