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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story!
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April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I don´t really know what to say. Your writing is amazing. I´ve read both versions and I love both. I´m still baffled about the heavy emotion you cause to me by your writing skills. Just wonderfull. Thank you for this great Story.
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April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAAA! I need more! must you end the chapters so? Good though, very, even with the uber sappyness.
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
first chapter was so lovely. second was fucking hot XD
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
uke L all the way man XD; he has no apparent sexual tendency, and seems like hes a lot less likely to know what to do in a relationship than raito XD; umm cute chapter, i honestly personally think that the story would be a bit better if the reactions of those who found out about them werent so peaceful. first of all, i think it would be natural for them to worry about how it may affect the investigation, and also even now in japan homosexuality is seriously anticonventional, so especially his dad, even if he were a nice guy, wouldnt accept it so easily. just my opinion though =]
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeaaah the romance is awesome. ummm only constructive crtiticism for this chapter is the whole kitten thing x____x i love this story, but that just sounds to pathetic to me. both raito AND ryuuzaki are far too strong to be so submissive to anyone else, especially if they love them. not like that, at least =/ give him a bit of dignity XD; and ummm cut down the pet names!
god i hope this doesnt sound harsh. i only review because i really like this and think your writing has awesome potential.
god i hope this doesnt sound harsh. i only review because i really like this and think your writing has awesome potential.
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
other chapter is way better. no reason for him to freak out to that extent =/ he's very in control of himself in the original manga/anime. i vote version 1!
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March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Maybe, just maybe I have an error in my memory. The highest percentage EVER of Light being Kira is 7%.
The story is interetng and presses me to continue reading. I like it except for the above written error.
The story is interetng and presses me to continue reading. I like it except for the above written error.
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i can see the version 1 seems plot driven and version 2 is all warm and fluff
so...i really like both versions..even if v1 is more fun and funnier, who can resist fluff and happy peaceful times? ;p
cause it's all our wish for the two to live happily ever after! :D
i like how innovative you are in creating phenomenons...like how the shinigami can only hear blurs of what humans are saying until the human touches the note..and i like how Remu touch both of them and let them feel each other's feelings through her..that's so cool XD
yeah the book floating and chasing them was very funny and the thought of them having the same conversation in endless loops as they forget their memories concerning the death note..i thought that was quite funny and interesting concept too =P
yeah i'm worried over what would Ryuk do..........and also what would Misa do...either way i like your Remu..being an ally to L is really a nice twist ^.^
and in version 2, i was thinkin for the most part that if Raito was gathering his family around in the living room to announce the relationship between him and L ^.^;;; haha but i would have like to see his entire family's reaction to their relationship..Sayu's teasings and such...much like when Misa visited Raito's house posing as girlfriend and they are all excited over it..quite funny
but it's so sweet that they are accepting L as a son/family member..it's all warm and fuzzy to think that it must be a first time for L to feel a homely and normal family atmosphere..something i'm sure he wishes he could experience.
and your updates are like one of the happiest moments XD because it's not just 1 chapter..it's 2 chapters!!! and they are mighty looonng and delicious to read XD
so...i really like both versions..even if v1 is more fun and funnier, who can resist fluff and happy peaceful times? ;p
cause it's all our wish for the two to live happily ever after! :D
i like how innovative you are in creating phenomenons...like how the shinigami can only hear blurs of what humans are saying until the human touches the note..and i like how Remu touch both of them and let them feel each other's feelings through her..that's so cool XD
yeah the book floating and chasing them was very funny and the thought of them having the same conversation in endless loops as they forget their memories concerning the death note..i thought that was quite funny and interesting concept too =P
yeah i'm worried over what would Ryuk do..........and also what would Misa do...either way i like your Remu..being an ally to L is really a nice twist ^.^
and in version 2, i was thinkin for the most part that if Raito was gathering his family around in the living room to announce the relationship between him and L ^.^;;; haha but i would have like to see his entire family's reaction to their relationship..Sayu's teasings and such...much like when Misa visited Raito's house posing as girlfriend and they are all excited over it..quite funny
but it's so sweet that they are accepting L as a son/family member..it's all warm and fuzzy to think that it must be a first time for L to feel a homely and normal family atmosphere..something i'm sure he wishes he could experience.
and your updates are like one of the happiest moments XD because it's not just 1 chapter..it's 2 chapters!!! and they are mighty looonng and delicious to read XD
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March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
your story is like one of the most beautiful things i've ever read T_T
the love depicted is so passionate..it's hotter and sweeter and cuter than any romance i've read of x_X
it made me wish i had or could experience such a love relationship, a caring, playful, flirtatious passionate and sexy lover *girl's fantasy* XD
all the while i'm reading, and knowing how death note ends...leaving me with worry that such a beautiful love might be threatened
but i love your twist and take on the story..it was quite splendidly innovative
i love both chapter 5 v1 and v2...but if i had to choose, i might choose v1 just because
the idea of L killing with a death note to seal their after-life destination to be the same path...i thought that was so damn sweet!
but v2 was also good, cause of the more fluffy scenes and how everything worked out with everyone..and them being mentally connected was really cool XD
and Raito calling L,kitten..is so so so cute
i like both seme and uke versions for which ever character...very interesting to see the different versions..the different feels..but depicting almost same events ...i really have no much preference who is seme or uke..i think these two work both ways
it would be super super nice if this story never ends..it would be like the love of Raito and L will live on forever ..like with every new chapter..we're able to check in on their lives and see what they're doing XD that would be awesome ..it's like having pets hehehe ^^;;;
the love depicted is so passionate..it's hotter and sweeter and cuter than any romance i've read of x_X
it made me wish i had or could experience such a love relationship, a caring, playful, flirtatious passionate and sexy lover *girl's fantasy* XD
all the while i'm reading, and knowing how death note ends...leaving me with worry that such a beautiful love might be threatened
but i love your twist and take on the story..it was quite splendidly innovative
i love both chapter 5 v1 and v2...but if i had to choose, i might choose v1 just because
the idea of L killing with a death note to seal their after-life destination to be the same path...i thought that was so damn sweet!
but v2 was also good, cause of the more fluffy scenes and how everything worked out with everyone..and them being mentally connected was really cool XD
and Raito calling L,kitten..is so so so cute
i like both seme and uke versions for which ever character...very interesting to see the different versions..the different feels..but depicting almost same events ...i really have no much preference who is seme or uke..i think these two work both ways
it would be super super nice if this story never ends..it would be like the love of Raito and L will live on forever ..like with every new chapter..we're able to check in on their lives and see what they're doing XD that would be awesome ..it's like having pets hehehe ^^;;;