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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw, the image of Ryuuzaki and Ratio cuddling is just so cute^^ They are so sweet together…
Ryuuzaki really needs someone to make sure of that he eats and sleeps regularly…loved how ya wrote the hospital scenes with a overprotecting L.
This telepathy thing and how they can meet inside each others minds is really interesting. Can’t wait to get to know more about it.
Loved the last sentence, a perfect way to end a chapter(in this version they seem to be more like equals, both of them wanting to protect the other. Can easily see them sharing the positions as uke & seme evenly between them)
Looking forward to see the sketches.
Ryuuzaki really needs someone to make sure of that he eats and sleeps regularly…loved how ya wrote the hospital scenes with a overprotecting L.
This telepathy thing and how they can meet inside each others minds is really interesting. Can’t wait to get to know more about it.
Loved the last sentence, a perfect way to end a chapter(in this version they seem to be more like equals, both of them wanting to protect the other. Can easily see them sharing the positions as uke & seme evenly between them)
Looking forward to see the sketches.
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I've just read from Chapter one to Ch 4.1. Straight. Wow, how in the world did you do it?! You just made the best possible candidate for ADD sit in her chair for hours.
I love this fic! You are such an awesome writer, and I love all the romance and the humor mixed right in. I'm really feeling for L right now. I'm impressed by the depth of emotion you express in your writing.
Hehe - I'll be sure to continue when I'm not about to pass out or be chased by relatives. Happy Holidays!
I love this fic! You are such an awesome writer, and I love all the romance and the humor mixed right in. I'm really feeling for L right now. I'm impressed by the depth of emotion you express in your writing.
Hehe - I'll be sure to continue when I'm not about to pass out or be chased by relatives. Happy Holidays!
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December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story and I'd have to say, V2 for Chapter Four is a lot better, a lot juicer and a lot longer.
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi there, does Death Note only have 12 vols?
my email address is graywolfm18@yahoo.com
my email address is graywolfm18@yahoo.com
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Vote: NEVER let the story end. Or write a sequal.
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am firmly in favour of NEVER ending this. I love panic-attack Ryuuzaki and Raito....*faints*
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NEVER let the story end (I can’t get too deep into this one at the risk of ruining the end for this story, but if the majority of you are interested…)
I CHOOSE THIS ONE!
You make the characters so fluffy and luffable... so much better than most writing I read nowadays!!!
I CHOOSE THIS ONE!
You make the characters so fluffy and luffable... so much better than most writing I read nowadays!!!
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! Another update finally! You have no idea how happy I was when I saw the new chapters! *does happy dance* But yeah, keep writing your story is still one of the best Death Note stories ever. Keep it up!
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hello... this is my first review but i've been following your story for quite awhile :) i must say, you write REALLY well. and i like the way that your story is long but not pointless.
As much as I don't want the story to end... to be practical, I hope that when it does end, the ending is good. and i guess i'd pick option 4. i think your next story would definitely be great too. I'm looking forward to it!!
As much as I don't want the story to end... to be practical, I hope that when it does end, the ending is good. and i guess i'd pick option 4. i think your next story would definitely be great too. I'm looking forward to it!!
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would go for option 2,3, and 4.
Since I've fallen in love with the story I really don’t want to see it ending any time soon.
A fanmanga would be great, looking forward seeing yar sketches.
I wouldn't mind reading a new fic , especially if it is within the deathnote fandom, but since I really like your writing style I would read it anyhow^^
Since I've fallen in love with the story I really don’t want to see it ending any time soon.
A fanmanga would be great, looking forward seeing yar sketches.
I wouldn't mind reading a new fic , especially if it is within the deathnote fandom, but since I really like your writing style I would read it anyhow^^