rate_review Reviews

This is so very very very good. Please don't stop!!!

Wow...I ugh, felt I should review this before I go take my cold shower soooo here it goes. This was very well written and I love inocent Light characterizations. I can't wait to see where the story goes, I mean this is Death Note, there's got to be a storm on the horizon.

*squeeeeeeel* the inner fangirl in me squeels of delight! nice chapter! although i hope tha in the future chapters that Raito is the uke! *can´t picture him in another way*

nyaaa that was HOT.. daaamn ryuuzaki, pleasing raito really turned you on and got you off XP and lol, raito's "let's hide!" and L's "yes, very illogical" was too funny/cute and so was the comment about his coffee being like drinking syrup and that he tried syrup and it wasn't as satisfying XD haha very good

ooooh i like where this is going. i hope that it wasn´t a one-shot!

Oh My KIRA! can this be?? a death note, L x Raito, fic that will have CHAPTERS??!! considering all the warnings in the summary, it must be so ne?! yay!! i like how this is starting off, i really loved L and softer-Raito ^__^ the timeline you're starting from, with the handcuffs, makes me *squee* lol, cuz how can that NOT be exploited??!! plus it was one of my favorite parts during the manga :p (hell, everything involving L was *sob* --you know why for the sob, ne?) i hope you even make this SEVERAL chapters long (if possible?? *puppy eyes*)