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by Chocho

person xunxin
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very lovely
gotta say that i wanted to slap ryu mayself.
he claims he loves shu but he also loves tat and that tat would never be second.
uh huh.
idiot
personally i think, if i remember right, it was tohma who sent it. didn't you mention something earlier, something tohma was thinking about, about an email or something or other? i remember tohma doing something.
of course i think we all know what eiri and shu did. well maybe not. of course maybe. :)
you just made ryu irritating enough for me to handle. some people make characters so annoying that i cant finish reading the story. lol. anywho, loved it. cant wait for more. OH! maybe shu and eiri should do some talking now? how bout that?
person Bookworm51485
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Were the lyrics at the beginning of the confrontation between Ryuichi and Shuichi? I'd wondered if they were lyrics, because it was a bit repetitive. I'm glad to see Shuichi dump him, HA!! Though I do wonder what it was that they did together what with Shuichi being dressed in Eiri's shirt (at least I'm guessing his shirt considering it's size). I don't know what Ryuichi was expecting, unless he set up a polygamous relationship with agreement from all parties, I don't see how he expected that it would be okay for him to be married to Shuichi and keep seeing Tatsuha. Delusional he is (Sorry, was chanelling Yoda for a minute there). But yea, I'm glad Shuichi finally dumped him and now maybe him and Yuki can move on together (though his hurt over Ryuichi cheating on him will probably make things complicated). Oh well, I can't wait until your next update.
person maria
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i just wanted to let you know that i've totally been in Shuichi's situation (without the whole famous thing ^^) and in my honest opionon it would be best for him to leave Ryu-chan And go with Yuki-sama, after all i'm much happier now that I'm with my current boyfriend... anyways, i just thought i would give my opion, and btw this is an awsome fic and very close to what emotions are felt in this kind of situation... anyways, ja ne!
person xunxin
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooooo cool
loved the last chapter
i thought i reviewed but i guess not
must have been thinking of something else
anywho, loved it
cant wait for more
hahahaha ryu you sucker! you lose!
update soon.
person inuyasha_freak02
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heehee.. the receptionist at the hotel has the same name as my aunt.. first and last bwahee XD!
And luv the fic! tis tres awesome
person fujinakaheero
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good, very good. I'm liking it and I'm glad Yuki is in the picture with Shuichi now.
Very nicely done, so keep up the good work.
I'll be waiting for more chapters.
So until then
Ja ne!
fujinakaheero.
person amy
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
looking forward to the next chapter. I feel so sorry for shu, i hope yuki makes him feel better.
person Rianas
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story!!!.

You must continue, YOU MUST!!!!
person Lisa
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been following your story for some time now - can't remember which web site. Great story and great writing style. I hate to beg but please please please update soon. Please!
person Blythe
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Argh! How could you just leave us there?!? The chapter was riveting, as always, but I want MORE! I am equally in love with "Beacause of You" so I can't complain too much. But..gah! I just can't get enough! Keep up the great work and don't leave us hanging to too long!

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