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June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very good with the mechanics, I will admit that. However, the primary reason to tell a story is to entertain. This story is EXTREMELY depressing. It seems to endlessly meander without a point. I have to wonder if such a simliar traumatic event in your life is making you want to end it all. If so, please seek psychiatric therapy at once.