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Well...you have a good writing style but your ending just feels like a cliched cop-out. Kinda disappointing after all that good plotting. Thanks for your hard work.
~S

Okay....I've tried and tried to be a good girl and just sit here reading until I finished, but here on the eighth chapter...I've found myself, in a bit of a dilemma. You see...Everytime I think something is going one way, it turns and goes the other. I had absolutely no idea that Ryuichi was going to "lead Shuichi [Neo] into the light" more or less that he will be willing to go along with Ryuichi's lil scheme.
Really though should I call it a scheme?
I honestly have no idea. I'm afraid to think they will make it, yet I'm apprehensive of what to think about Yuki and Shuichi. What will happen there? He cant just disappear. Then it hits me...Death. Isnt this where the story is going? I have no idea. Honestly I'm slightly intimitated. I dont know whether or not to laugh, cry, yell, or be happy.
You're writing is unpredictable...and if any person dislikes the story...I will personally kick their sorry ass. They obviously havent read something as, on the lines of fanfiction, great as this. They are just crazy fan girls/boys that are driven on wild Yuki sex.
I appreciate your talent, and I had to make that made known.
Thank you,
Kasey aka Toni'sGirl [if you go onto the Fanfiction.net site]

OKAY WHAT THE FUCK!?
DUDE! My brother walked in because I was hunched over the computer and he said that he heard me yelling, screaming, laughing histerically and crying and whispering to myself!!!
He thought I was going insane...and why? Because of thsi story!!!!!!!!! Seriously wtf!?
I need more and I'm looking for those sequels and if I cant find them I may just cry for the rest of my life?
Answer me one question...Did he live?

no this cant end.. its too good to end, i gave up going out with my friends and going to the mall so that ic ould finish reading this but now that its over i wonder more and more about if the life that Shuichi ended up chosing was the real one? or was that the one in the coma? i dont know what else to say but that this story is amazing and even if the characters had been orginal i would've read it all the same, you should do some serious thinking about becomming an author... anyways, ja ne

OMG! I didn't expect that.. though i had this feeling that shu's really the person

eiri has been talking to in the hospital... hmm... you really got me hooked on this...

great fic! that was soooo unexpected...


i'm looking forward to your sequels....

I have to say just one thing to describe what I'm feeling right now. Wonderful. Just.. wow, really good. A wonderful twist to the whole thing. Very well written, you can tell the plot was well thought out what with how the ending was so rushed, a lot of stories do that which is annoying but yours left you in suspense right until the end, making you sit on the edge of your seat to find out what would happen next so bravo! I give you my cudos, it was a good read and I look forward to your sequel. So when i see it up and about on here expect another review from me.
So until then.
Ja ne!
Fujinakaheero

Oh My Fucking God!!!!! That was so fucking awesome...what a fantastic last chapter....damn...cannot wait for the sequals...you are so fucking amazing!...love you to death.....catti

ooh, th

Great twist at the end!!! I was totally clueless!! Anyway, you better do write a sequel, because that just didn't seem finished. Actually, it did, but at the same time I want to see them together some more! I'm just a sucker for the happy couple stuff! Great job!

ooooohhhh...i wonder who is Yuki's comatosed confidante...??? hmm... to get the answer to that, please write more! more! i'm looking forward to more of this fic ; )