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PLEASE PLEASE don't tell me that Shu is the one on a coma! It kind of felt that way in the last part of chapter 13. It would make the story really good in my opinion but it will make me fell very, very sad. So, if he is the one in the coma, those that mean that the life you are showing is actually the book that Eiri is writting and telling Shu. Anyway you are a very good writter please don't stop writting. This is one the best Gravitiation story that I had read. I hope that you update soon ja ne! ;>

good...please hurry and get it up!
omfg...i love this fic!
this is the first gravitation fic ive read since nine month torture ended....and i have to say...i regret not reading gravitation fics if this is how good they are! ^.^
ive been sitting in front of my computer all damn day reading the 13 chapters you have up...and i have to say...i wish that there was more up right now!
im dying!...i need to know!....please tell me hell go back to yuki!...it would kind of suck if he didnt!
please hurry and update!
im dying to know what happens next!

Keep it coming, what happens next?

Oooh! A mystery! Can't wait to find out more about Eiri's confidante! I've been enjoying your story from the beginning and am very much looking forward to another chapter. It's fun to see how Shu's demeanor shifts depending upon where he is and who he's with. I like that he's a more complex character in your story. He's too often portrayed as one dimensional. Keep up the good work and update soon!

Not enough for sure! I'm addicted to this story. The story line of the break up, american and new band with a japanese tour is over worked, but your tale is a breath of fresh air. I like the characteristics you are portraying in this fanfiction. Perhaps we should campaign for you to write the Gravitation novels available. Your stories would be so much more thrilling. Update soon? Can't wait for the next installment.

Great chapter! I thought the song selections for this one were especially great and you really left me wanting more now!! Who is the person that Yuki visits in the hospital after hours??? I also hope that Yuki will go see Shuichi or vice versa, even if they don't get back together. They really need some more talking or something. At this point though, I really don't quite know where you are going due to that mystery person. mhh, hope you keep writing. Can't wait for more.

I've gotta admit I didn't want to read this when I saw that Shu had had plastic surgery but I had to give it a chance and I'm really glad I did. The only thing I've got against it is that there's far too little of Eiri at the moment. Hope you can finish soon I'm dying to see how this turns out!

hi! hmm your story's getting exciting.. so, it seems that shuichi's not the only one who's changed, even hiro.. i wasn't expecting that though i like it ; ) and oh, poor ryuichi... i thought him and shuichi may develop a thing.. tsktsktsk... i like the idea that yuki did not give up nor shuichi.. i wanna see how they get back together again, and i'm sue it'll be another tearjerker.. i like the way your story is progressing and i'm looking forward to MORE of it..

I love this fanfic. There are not many great long Gravitation fanfics out there and this is one of the better ones. You are good at keeping the original characters as they are or developing them further as is the case with Shindo. The changes in shindo are also very believable. It is also great, that you opted not to get cartoony with the story as some other authors have. I know it is probably my personal preference, but I don't need to read about people breaking through walls and developing super human speed when it comes to Gravitation fanfics. Reading it is not as funny as seeing it and I have always liked the more serious aspects of the series better. I guess, that's the other thing I like about your story. Things are a little more complicated. Even though I wanted Yuki and Shindo back together, it would have been unbelievable that one meeting after six years all of a sudden fixes all problems. It takes time and you take the time to develop that story and delve into the more serious relationship issues. Great job. I can't wait for updates, since ultimately I want to see the two back together!!

ah, very nice chapter. Pretty sad but I'm excited to see what happens next.
So I shall wait for your next chapter.
SO until next time,
Ja ne!
Fujinakaheero.