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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i lllllllloooooooovvvvvvvvvveeeeeeee it!! the drama between shuichi & yuki when they finally met again was really a tearjerker!! Hmmm... Ryuichi's sssssooooo COOOL! i can't wait, what happens next??? pls update ASAP!!
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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read the first chapter and I was immidiately hooked! You just have to watch out for a couple of spelling mistakes (like carier is CAREER) but pther than that everything else is fine. I love your story, it has originality and I hope you update soon!
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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to give you kudos, this is one of the best angst ridden fanfic I've read.
I am a tad disapointed you had to end it so soon.
I just love painful angst fanfics, the pain in these stories helps me to forget about my own pain.
Anyway if you ever feel like doing the whole story I was wondering if you'd do an alternate ending, like Neo throws everything away and returns to america with the 7sins and probably falls for Rick and Yuki has a total breakdown and commits suicide.
I am a tad disapointed you had to end it so soon.
I just love painful angst fanfics, the pain in these stories helps me to forget about my own pain.
Anyway if you ever feel like doing the whole story I was wondering if you'd do an alternate ending, like Neo throws everything away and returns to america with the 7sins and probably falls for Rick and Yuki has a total breakdown and commits suicide.
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have been enjoying your fic and feel bad that I haven't reviewed before now. Yes it was heavy on the angst but I love almost all of the "Shuichi gets a back bone" and "Shuichi turns into Yuki" fics. I liked your take on it. May I suggest another site that would love your fic? g u r a b i t e s h i y o n . n e t is a grav only site and has it's own angst section. and people over there would love you and wouldn't let you cut the soul out of this story. So come on and share the love!
Trish
Trish
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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How could you be so mean to Yuki? Yeah, most of the time he deserves it, but that was going to far. I was really enjoying your story, but now, I don't know, I feel a little dissapointed. Anyway, I will still read your updates, I just hope you have them back together before you finish.
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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
KEEP IT COMING.Don't you dare stop there I will hunt you down if you do. Will Eiri really let Shu-chan walk away with out doing anything to keep him?
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe that your story has been read by over 200 people and you only have eight reviews, well nine including mine. I think you deserve over 200 reviews. I'm really enjoying your story, and I can't wait for the next chapter. PLEASE update soon.
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, and your still updating fast which is great. I haven't been excited about a story in a long time, and yours is making me very excited, wanting to know what happens, whether Yuki and Shu get back together (which I hope they do). Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter.
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading your story and I really like it. I can't wait to find out what happens next. (I hope it will be soon.)
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How could you leave it there? You meanie. This chappie was great and the ending, well...that's just making me more anxious to know what's coming next. Your fast updates are great too, it's keeping me interested. Anyway, I really hope you update soon, I so want to know what happens next. Bye for now.