rate_review Reviews

awsome... very nice... but zomg!!! such a cliffhanger !!!!!!!!!!

Really good story. I like how the characters are portrayed and the changes to personalities after their respective circumstances. I especially like Crawford's and Aya's relationship, which is both sweet and something else. Can't wait for the next chapter to see how the interaction between Youji and Schu would play out.

oOoOoZ BATHTIME!!! mwahahahaha
i can guess what Crawford saw.... go schu, indeed!
lol <3

For some reason, I think it's very hot when Aya gets hurt. :) It is also hot, that Schuldig and Yohji thing.
Another wonderful chapter, you rock

Just a quick note to say how much I continue to love this story. A tipsy Ran is indeed a delight. It's also great to see his interaction with Schu. I was worried initially about how the addition of Yohji might disturb the dynamics of the story, but now I anxiously look forward to more. I particularly love the way you've stayed true to fundamental aspects of Ran and Brad's characters. It is hard to see Brad ever loosening the reins of control as the leader of Schwarz, and there is a logic to being leader given his foresight. Ran, however, is also a born leader, with a formidable will and possible ability to get them out of trouble that Brad doesn't foresee. Perhaps most fundamentally, it seems integral to Ran's character for there to be a purpose for his missions, other than simply money or anarchy (the one reason given by Brad in the anime). I hope that even as Ran has learned to grow and change, that Brad can at least learn to bend a bit.

yay~ another lovely update <333
i really love this story

I am really enjoying this story, although I must confess that my focus is more on the budding (okay, barely a green shoot, but a shoot with promise) relationship between Schuldig and Yohji. Schu being my favorite WK character and YxS being my favorite couple. But I think you have done a marvelous job keeping everyone in character and yet also getting them together. I especially like the way you have built an odd but caring relationship between Aya and Schu. The idea of him lavishing the tenderness on Schu that Brad won't accept is sweet and a bit ironic.

Hurray! Yohji's back!

oh please write more.

This is very good !! Please update...