rate_review Reviews

Homgawd.. This is just excellent.. Astaroth did seem nice here, which was a total surprise for me since he's always loosing his temper! I just loved this fic!!

I was looking at this again and I noticed your note from the bottom of chapter two. I think you're right in that the risk of birth defects in a child of siblings would not be the same since angels (and therefore demons also) are created, not born, so being "siblings" would really only be in name since they don't share parents. However, in Angel Sanctuary, the children of angels (and, again, demons, one could assume - like Lucifer and Barbelo's monstrous children) DO normally suffer birth defects just as a matter of course. The I-Children, right? But then, not all of them appear deformed, and some - the Ions - develop strong and unusual powers. So, it will be interesting to see what kind of child they end up having.

I think that the idea of this fic is very original, and there is a lot of potential here. However, I also think that this fic could seriously do with a good beta to take care of spelling and grammar mistakes, characterization, technical issues (like the logistics of pregnancy and childbirth) and the like.

Nevertheless, it's nice to see another Astaroth story. He's an underused character.

One more time, it´s me *giggle* oh thank you so much for your hard work. I´m really happy now *she have her baby* *yeahhhhh* *astaroth was nice* *yeahhhhh*
Will there be a sequel? Pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee *puppyeyes* *deep bow* Master pleaseeeeee *beg*
You know, it was really funny how astaroth tried to think about help, and his sister was in labor *laugh* like "will you be quiet, i try to think" *laughs hard* Oh good that was so funny Yeahhhhhhhh.
Thank you for your hard work, i enjoyed every moment of your story *bow*
yours Nef ^-^

Its me again. Yeahhhhhh She will having her baby *dance* thank you ^-^ *grin*
I would really want to know who told them about her baby. >_< Astaroth be nice to her *kick him*
Thank you for your hard work, yours Nef ^-^

PS: Luv your story yeahhhh

Yeah Yeah Yeah, i´m here again! Astaroth was really "nice" this time to his sister, I loved it ^-^
What will happen next? Ohhhhh please let her have her baby, *grin* Thank you for your hard work *bow*
Yours Nefertari ^-^

I know this will nothing new to you, but i realllllyyyy love your storys ^-^ And i love this pairing, please update soon *puppyeyes*
Please please *beg* Please master *slave modus*
Yours Nef