rate_review Reviews

Yeah, it's a cute story and a cute idea. But you should really give credit to P.L. Nunn of www.BishonenWorks.com, since she is the one who originally made the quote, and all. You know I could get myself kicked out of college for a simple act of plagerisim like that, therefore, i think a little credit to the author is appropriate. you can find it in her story "Vindication", chapter three.

This is a riot! The colloquialisms are so damn funny I had to keep rereading to catch them all because I'd start laughing so hard I'd miss the next one. Ah, this really does capture Gojyo's joie de vivre. And the title is nothing short of brilliant!

Koo Koo shkadoo! Don't listen to that person. The paragraphs are fine! Perfect! Amazing. Ok, nice cheeky grin and I bow. That you so much for writing this! It had me smiling all the way through. You ever been in a house with three other people next to you asking why you have such a cheesy look on your face and why you're laughing ever five seconds? It's unnerving really. But that doesn't matter, what I'm here for is to tell you how much I adore your story, which I do! But I must say one thing. Your phrases are captivating! Some of the things you said, well, typed but who knows, you may have said them, well, anyway, they're magnificent, funny, brilliant! I'm a suck up ain't I? Yes and proud of it! Mieshka!!!!!!!

Isn't this an older fic? I think I read it somewhere else.

I like it alot, but the way it is kinda sucks. Better paragraphs would be nice.