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by draechaeli

schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
are u Japanese?
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
continuecontinue you must, no stoping it cause i'm dying to know what's gonna happen and is Daisuke able to save Saotoshi well i hope so but i'm not i a fan of his or anything, this fic sounds like something Yukiru Sugisaki would write him/her and just as it is it's clear an briliant just like he/she wrote it.
i didn't really like the first chap though cause it was well kinda boring and for a second ther i thought they were in london in the begining of it but the rest was turned out great cause it turn out i loved it.
and i also argee on the pairings that Daisuke should be with Saotoshi, well i think that's how you spell his name.
person Christy
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it. The way you write them together seems so comfotable and fits. Can't wait for the next chapter ^^
person Neko of Darkness
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello ^^

It's great, like the last chapter if I'm allowed to say that.
I think you're good in describe how they look. I would like to see the picture Dai-chan has drawn. A pic with Dai-chan and Sato-chan is surely something you have to look at once in your life *_*

I'm waiting for the next chapter. I hope you write if it is online like last time ^^
I'm looking forward to it and think, it will be great

Your Neko of Darkness ^_~
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is very good. i eagerly await your next update.
person Anon
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm loving it so far, can't wait for the rest!
person Anon
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. I hope you continue soon! :)
person Neko of Darkness
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello ^^

I just read your Fanfic "The Art of Our Blood" and I think it's great. I simply love it.
I hope you will post the next chapter soon ^^
I wait for it *she sits down before the Computer and wait*

The Story is realy amazing. I had to laugh when Sato said Dai-chan he need the near of him. I thought Daisuke would run away for a moment, but then I thought about it nearer and I guess, in this vein, you had wrote it, it's quite better. Or how you described the relationship of all the characters, especially of the Harada's and Daisuke. I also don't like stories with the pairing Daisuke/Riku and/or Satoshi/Risa >.>
That's so disgusting...

Hm...
I think that was all I wanted to say- or wait. One more.
The last scene, when Daiki and Kosuke are talking... it's a very exciting scene I think, but it's also very sad. They say, there is no really hope for Hikari-kun. It's easy to see, that they think there is not really a way in hell that Daisuke could love him the way he do.
It's so sadden ;.;

I hope you let them get together (but I think that way)

So, that's all for now
Hope to hear from you soon (please think of the Fanfiction)

sincerely yours
Neko of Darkness

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